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The Betrayal

She didn’t like it there. She wasn’t sure if she ever had. It was the weather, the food…the eyes. But the seduction had been complete and she, so willing. She’d believed in the dream, in everything…even in love. Was it love then that teased her now? She found herself laughing softly, sharing in the joke as the wind massed across the water and a escapee gust swept suddenly, flirtatiously up her skirt.

Her long, richly tendrilled hair reached out, remembering the lover’s dance and her own art of complete surrender as the clouds darkened. She paused, just long enough to hear the long, low howl of the wind as it sped towards her through bare, leafless branches. This lyrical, thickening howl was familiar as it teased a tear from her eye and flung it out across the increasingly white tipped waters.

She looked back, at the warm doorway, to the way back in and where her lover slept, in silence. She knew now, sweet knowledge, that she must learn how to skim stones under the night moon and gather the courage to hold tight to her magic carpet in the thickening, darkening storm.



Its still all about love….

My first mini story here. And the first for a long long time.

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Comments

  • Trish O'Brien
    Trish O'Brienalmost 4 years ago

    Very poignant Robert, and such a familiar scene that its almost disarming. Beautifully written, you are a wonderful writer :-)

  • Thank you Trish x

    – Robert Knapman

  • -Lilith-
    -Lilith-almost 4 years ago

    Big big big SIGH!!! What a wonderful writing Robert. I love it!!!

  • Wonderful Lilith. Thanks .)

    – Robert Knapman

  • Mrs Mel Brackstone
    Mrs Mel Bracks...almost 4 years ago

    We’ve missed you!!! So pleased to see your art and writing making a comeback!

  • Ahhh Mel – you are spring rain in a parched forest.

    – Robert Knapman

  • Lisa  Jewell
    Lisa Jewellalmost 4 years ago

    Sublime imagery….

    I’m holding tight to my magic carpet….

    This piece has moved me deeply….

    x

  • Cassey
    Casseyalmost 4 years ago

    She knew now, sweet knowledge, that she must learn how to skim stones under the night moon what a beautiful image this conjures. Absolutely gorgeous writing from the heart.

  • Arcadia Tempest
    Arcadia Tempestalmost 4 years ago

    A weeping in the wind is heard in this beautiful verse….. WOW…there is so much undercurrent here that it swept me away with it. _beautiful_X

  • sandraellen
    sandraellenalmost 4 years ago

    Lovely Robert, thankyou for the read

  • BiographyofRed8
    BiographyofRed8almost 4 years ago

    your writing is sublimely rich in its imagery, in the meaning like a breath taken on the wind.. tis edgy and thrilling drawing the reader in