Dead End
A thought
For the next month (from May 27th onwards) I’m suggesting people not leave comments. Although I really do appreciate your them (I miss them already) and its going to hard, I’m inviting you to instead either leave a comment or upload an image here
If you have already been to the This Is Oz website, thankyou. If you’d still like to leave comments on my RB work anyway feel free – but please also visit the site and contribute
Many thanks
Robert
I hurled myself around the corner
To catch love’s oily shadow scurrying urgently away
Down a dead end alley
butchart
i hope i’m allowed to comment on this one….:)
i love your thoughts… they come deep and full of elusive beauty…...... xxx…..........b
mymoosejaw
Oh that feeling is familiar to me. but not for a while now.
BiographyofRed8
I already visited the site a couple of times now.. brilliant line To catch love’s oily shadow
Robert Knapman replied
Yes I saw a comment of yours there – wonderful Red you are a star :)
yt sumner
I love the site too.
Robert Knapman replied
Thanks Yasmine – I am currently chasing PINK to add an image and message to the site – well why not lol…..
moops66
Beautiful…
PJ Ryan
To catch love’s oily shadow scurrying urgently away
absolutely brilliant line x
Sarafeline
I’m New here be kind ….
This was so intense for such a short piece..Awesome!.
Sara.x.
OriginallyChris
a very deep piece in a compact amout of words.
the style i love.
very nice
roger boreham
think you too much sir,,,, for me the second line was unecessary
Kassandra Pino
Short, yet full of meaning!
Brilliant!!!
Ash180470
I love your short bits of writing, the way you give us an image, write it succinctly, then leave it alone and leave the reader thinking. nicely done. Ax
ArcadiaTempest
Short but so full of gritty emotion….the imagery was power packed!!
Darren Stein
Very good
parole
Really like this
sunsette15
A great opening, now what happens down the alley?
missbubble3
GENIUS.
xxLoneVoicexx
best 20 words i ever read
Robert Knapman replied
:)
andy tetlow
wonderful piece of writing.