Fools are we
To think we counted
Less
Than fear
Or more
than street meat
Who would have thought
Us dead
And buried
Rank?
I have one and I think so
Mmmm…perhaps
Our madness strikes like a terrorised cobra
At your propoganda
Unsettling
Like twin tower dust
And then the flies came
Sence-Awed
I have a sence of this one’s meaning for me. However I realize this is rather unfathomable. I like the way it plays out though… Cheers.
For Butch who tells me I should write more .)
butchart, 3 months ago
i’ve taken this to heart….........................b
Robert Knapman in reply to butchart’s comment, 3 months ago
Such a big heart too ,))
Robert Knapman, 3 months ago
Mmmm….this one seems like it might be rather intangible. Am I a freak?
JenniferB, 3 months ago
it’s not intangible.
Robert Knapman in reply to JenniferB’s comment, 3 months ago
I guess this one just didn’t resonate eh? Or maybe it was the acid ;))
JenniferB, 3 months ago
I don’t need anything artificial to alter my mental state any more than it already is… ;-)
I collected this one didn’t I? It did resonate, only I’m in a pissy, defensive mood and for some reason people have wanted to incite me all day… I just numbed myself to reacting to it… I mean… you do value your own meat don’t you Robert? ;-)
Robert Knapman in reply to JenniferB’s comment, 3 months ago
I didn’t mean you on acid (if that’s what you thought) I meant me. And I didn’t mean it didn’t resonate for you, I meant in general (no comments etc).... ;) lol. And…yes…I do value myself…thanks for the reminder J. Cheers :)
JenniferB, 3 months ago
haha! yes, I DID think you meant me on acid! lol… See! I told you I was feeling defensive! Anything anyone says to me right now gets interpreted as being an insult! I just read your other new poem, Deliverance, and I read the part that said, (gutter tramp!), lol, and I thought, oh no! he’s biting at me again! haha, see, I’m feeling so fragile that everything becomes about meeeeee! That second poem is sensationally written, but yes, the acid still oozes in it, so I refuse to misinterpret it, hence, making a twat out of myself by commenting! Unless… Of course, it really was about me!!! haha… paranoid! lol
Robert Knapman in reply to JenniferB’s comment, 3 months ago
Unless… Of course, it really was about me!!! haha… paranoid
LOL…Nope…i’d never have a go at you like that…but it is vaguely possible that you inspired it by your writing…where does our inspiration or thoughts come from in the end anyway? Damn drugs…holiday time teehee.
JenniferB, 3 months ago
where does our inspiration or thoughts come from in the end anyway?
‘Tis one of the few, positive spin-offs of having numerous mental health issues… ;-)
Robert Knapman in reply to JenniferB’s comment, 3 months ago
Hahaha…hmmm…what shall it be today obsessive compulsive writing, depressively reflective journal or the excitement of bi polar creativity…I see what you mean ;)) The preceding randomly chosen mental health conditions relate to no particular person and in random order. And no animals were hurt in the writing of it.
JenniferB, 3 months ago
Oh no! My mental health conditions are way more creative than that, they’re like a Mcdonald’s Combo, not a single serving!
Pyschopath
Neologism
and a sprinkling of
Narcissism
With Fries! :-P xox
Only cows were killed in the processing and delivery of the above meal…