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This is a darker version of an image I like and that has been uploaded to RB in the past. Taken in an Adelaide cafe on Rundle Street East.

I Left You

i left you
when you were high and dry
i didn’t offer my hand
or heart
then
just a crimson version of another time
tipsy with lust

i remember a wind
leaves
and a strange smokey sensation
like just before a bushfire
which swept over your brittle pains
singeing

the suitcase was open this morning
just for the memory
your letter
that fallen letter
there were cracks
spilled its tumbling self
upon my lap

I stood then
disintegrating the cradle
and once and for all
forgetting you
again

Copyright Robert Knapman

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adelaide, back, barrier, cafe, male, man, power, shadow, strength

Comments

  • Dave Aarons
    Dave Aaronsover 6 years ago

    Excellent

  • Christina Norwood
    Christina Norwoodover 6 years ago

    Love the subdued tones and reduced colour palette in this Robert. Nice work.

  • tonilouise
    tonilouiseover 6 years ago

    Very very nice. Love it

  • Sharon Hammond
    Sharon Hammondover 6 years ago

    Oh yes, this has a mood. Luv it

  • Andrew Bosman
    Andrew Bosmanover 6 years ago

    Very powerful and evocative Robert.

  • mklau
    mklauover 6 years ago

    Wonderfully powerful and evocative

  • Paul Louis Villani
    Paul Louis Vil...over 6 years ago

    Love the overall feel and color tones! Your treatment here is spot on! :D

  • ltruskett
    ltruskettover 6 years ago

    looks like he needs strength, powerful, very good.

  • missalyshachristine
    missalyshachristineover 6 years ago

    i remember it!
    and i like this version better..the tones add a little extra somethin
    =]

  • Paul Fleming
    Paul Flemingover 6 years ago

    Agree with missalyshachristine … I like this darker version better. Feels grittier, deeper, more powerful, yet also vulnerable, torn and confused. Yes he is strong, but maybe only on the surface?

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