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Derailed Train of Thought

All was certain, the tracks determined
each and every day
Cold steel certainty dictated
all thoughts and machinations
complacent
Will the unfeeling rails define us?
Will the force-fed rout devide us?

I stand, a locomotive, raging off the track
teetering engine building steam
throwing all your notions back
to the overbearing brother providing
lies steeped in half truths
deceptive

Shall we dance amongst the littered wreck
of boxcars toppled over?
This free thinking deemed chaotic by compliant passengers
begging for margins to live in.

~our brakes never screeched
as the truth we beseeched is doled out so reluctant
I stand, an illuminating conductor, ready to delve
outside the railroad ties
seeking new horizons for crashsites


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Free thinking is becoming a thing of the past. With a worlds knowledge at our fingertips-there is no need to retain any knowledge.
Fuck that.

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philosophy, technology, intelligence, knowledge, humanity

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  • WolfSoul
    WolfSoulalmost 3 years ago

    I don’t know what to say dude, this is undeniable man. great piece ;

  • Thanks brother you’ve been really supportive of my work man. Always appreciated!!

    – Steve Voorhees

  • JaneCSolomon
    JaneCSolomonalmost 3 years ago

    me too x

  • Hathor
    Hathoralmost 3 years ago

    I’ll dance all night to that song, myfellow freakflagflyer. I’ve never been normal – who the fuck would want to be?
    awwwesome bro.

  • Lisa  Jewell
    Lisa Jewellalmost 3 years ago

    a great metaphor,
    love your world view….a great piece.

  • sandra .
    sandra .almost 3 years ago

    I agree with Lisa, fantastic metaphor :))

  • lisameryl
    lisamerylalmost 3 years ago

    Steve, what can I say!? Pure genuis! Great piece! I like the way you think and write! Cheers!

  • Christie  Moses
    Christie Mosesalmost 3 years ago

    step outside the box, and think outside the norm. I prefer to believe there is existence outside the realm of my own cosmic egg lol It is those that blindly follow, that never learn to see ;)
    I love this…….

  • Thanks darlin’! Good to know you’re on the same page!! ; ) xoxo

    – Steve Voorhees

  • James Watson
    James Watsonalmost 3 years ago

    Great write love the imagery

  • Thanks J….always appreciate the feed back!!

    – Steve Voorhees

  • RVRFNX
    RVRFNXalmost 3 years ago

    I dig this piece :)

  • Thank you my friend. Much appreciated!!!

    – Steve Voorhees

  • Heather Vallance
    Heather Vallancealmost 3 years ago

    The imagery is great!