All was certain, the tracks determined
each and every day
Cold steel certainty dictated
all thoughts and machinations
complacent
Will the unfeeling rails define us?
Will the force-fed rout devide us?
I stand, a locomotive, raging off the track
teetering engine building steam
throwing all your notions back
to the overbearing brother providing
lies steeped in half truths
deceptive
Shall we dance amongst the littered wreck
of boxcars toppled over?
This free thinking deemed chaotic by compliant passengers
begging for margins to live in.
~our brakes never screeched
as the truth we beseeched is doled out so reluctant
I stand, an illuminating conductor, ready to delve
outside the railroad ties
seeking new horizons for crashsites
Free thinking is becoming a thing of the past. With a worlds knowledge at our fingertips-there is no need to retain any knowledge.
Fuck that.
Comments
I don’t know what to say dude, this is undeniable man. great piece ;
Thanks brother you’ve been really supportive of my work man. Always appreciated!!
– Steve Voorhees
me too x
I’ll dance all night to that song, myfellow freakflagflyer. I’ve never been normal – who the fuck would want to be?
awwwesome bro.
a great metaphor,
love your world view….a great piece.
I agree with Lisa, fantastic metaphor :))
Steve, what can I say!? Pure genuis! Great piece! I like the way you think and write! Cheers!
step outside the box, and think outside the norm. I prefer to believe there is existence outside the realm of my own cosmic egg lol It is those that blindly follow, that never learn to see ;)
I love this…….
Thanks darlin’! Good to know you’re on the same page!! ; ) xoxo
– Steve Voorhees
Great write love the imagery
Thanks J….always appreciate the feed back!!
– Steve Voorhees
I dig this piece :)
Thank you my friend. Much appreciated!!!
– Steve Voorhees
The imagery is great!