Long deep throat

Thunder rolls off her tongue this morning.
She’s a mischievous wench running amok in the clouds pocking the dawn with bass laughter.
Bisexual weather wench with her masculinity sounding the atmosphere and slowly dressing in her static lightening chemise to tease the world below.

Her playfulness stirs hidden dark thoughts yet I ‘m still here listening to her rollback.
It’s a roundhouse kick to the metaphorical navel with the promise of rain to freshen and a baptism wash bursting with anew.

The thunderstorm moves closer to my little house.
I tuck my arms in and curl up my legs keeping safe.
The dog’s hairs stand up to acknowledge her approach.

Someone has told her news from the heavens that wasn’t to her liking for her voice growls like a belly full of boom!
What fool spoke these words bringing her tone down in her long deep throat?

© K S Hardy 2011

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A thunderstorm flash
Challenge 19
Prompt -’ I’m still here’

Feelings and words fall on to the page
Sometimes they bite back
Sometimes they tug on our sleeve
Sometimes they have a cheeky grin
They stay once a page has found them
Words are faithful to us even in the dark

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Comments

  • eon .
    eon .over 3 years ago

    Mischievous splendor..in Melbourne weather Gee Major

  • Hi there
    The weather has been such a mixed bag of tricks lately me thinks….I hear hail was on the menu there as well. :)

    – Arcadia Tempest

  • Donna19
    Donna19over 3 years ago

    Gotta love the energy of the storm! I really like this. Glad the gender of the storm was actually the passion of a women.

  • I wrote this inspired the other day listening to a thunderstorm moving towards my home….She was in fine from Ms Weather Wench :O)

    – Arcadia Tempest

  • vampvamp
    vampvampover 3 years ago

    fantastic!

  • A good thunderstorm is so cathartic for one’s moods me thinks :O)

    – Arcadia Tempest

  • Sorina Williams
    Sorina Williamsover 3 years ago

    I have often thought of her this way too… beautifully written !:)

  • Hi Sorina
    Many thanks for your complimentary comment :O)

    – Arcadia Tempest

  • Rocky Loder
    Rocky Loderover 3 years ago

    beautiful words,great write….

  • Hi Rocky
    Cheers mate, here’s to good stormy weather to blow out the hidden words ;o)

    – Arcadia Tempest

  • Lisa  Jewell
    Lisa Jewellover 3 years ago

    I find this to be very sensual
    the imagery is a tempest I like to stare at….

    of course the last three lines, can be taken as rage or perhaps passion. I shall go the latter for that is the mood I’m in. A fantastic inking my darling…xxxxx

  • Loved the stormy weather we had here recently….it so fitted my need to be creative and to be inspired by such was really fabulouso :O)) xxxx

    – Arcadia Tempest

  • tjs1010
    tjs1010over 3 years ago

    I never thought of a storm as sensual before, will certainly look at ‘her’ differently from now on! =)
    wonderful work KS xo

  • Hi Tom
    Well actually until I wrote this neither did I! It was a good storm of creative inspiration that day ;O) xo

    – Arcadia Tempest

  • sandra22
    sandra22over 3 years ago

    Mmmm, you have made the storm sound sexy Karen and I love the visual of the
    “dog’s hairs standing up”
    Sandra xo

  • Hi ya Sandrakitty
    Yeh the poor pooch was not too impressed with all that static energy in the air and the booms in the sky didn’t actually perturb him but he was wondering me thinks what that animal in the sky was ….. ;O) xx

    – Arcadia Tempest

  • timbuckley
    timbuckleyover 3 years ago

    my God can you write wonderful

  • Oh Tim….gotta tell you when I saw your comment it absolutely made me smile and feel like I accomplished something so worthwhile with this write. Thanks so very much. x

    – Arcadia Tempest

  • ian osborne
    ian osborneover 3 years ago

    Blinding flash AT and an original take on the prompt (of course!!)

  • Hi Ian
    many thanks for stopping by …..I will catch up on your newer posts asap. :O)

    – Arcadia Tempest

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