Written Rush
Written in a rush
unable to speak slowly
the making of it all has been undone
a heart speak unheard though the voice was calm
rivers running thoughts to the waterfall that doesn’t wash for her
let there be a shadow proclaimed that always hid under the bushel of light
no tears in the cup for it fell over when the dog kicked the cat who kicked the truth
© K S Hardy 2011
Comments
Good God woman! You never fail to astound and move me.
Sometimes rushing through the day makes it go slower with the backward steps you end up with….. slow down is the hope. xx
– Arcadia Tempest
raw and real….
that last line is something other…
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It sure is a busy time…..this must of been prophetic xxxx
– Arcadia Tempest
Amazing writing (as always),, I love the last line:))xx
Hi there
Hope the silly season is being merry with you. xxx
– Arcadia Tempest
I feel like I’ve just been caught in a whirly-whirly …
I was wearing me without Elvira ;)
– Arcadia Tempest
KS, love it all but so love this line
“a heart speak unheard though the voice was calm”
Wonderful
Hi there Tony
If only our heart could speak over the rush of the day’s demands at times….what a difference this would make. xx
– Arcadia Tempest
My goodness, I’m rushing with each and every word until the abrupt end. Wow!
Hi ya
The rush of this has paid off in full going by your comment! Excellento! xx
– Arcadia Tempest
" a heart speak unheard though the voice was calm " sigh diddly sigh
A moving rush Doll
Sandra xo
Hi ya Sandra-kitty
a big meow hello to you….. there is always time to purr when you have been around me tinks. xxx
– Arcadia Tempest
My mind in a rush… Ink reed red… What is it you said, “when the dog kicked the cat who kicked the truth”? Is the truth reel? Cool cat… Kick to see…
You make my mind spin and as a top, wander and teeter and…
LOL ….tis good to spin and topple now and then but never when one is driving tonnage me thinks! xx
– Arcadia Tempest
Chilling. Thanks for writing this
Hi there
Thank you so much for stopping by Jascie. x
– Arcadia Tempest
This is great!!!! MUST make time to read more of your wonderful work…Ellanita
Hi Ellanita
Many thanks for stopping by to ride the rush of this one! :O))
– Arcadia Tempest