I was on the A24 bus traveling to my usual destination and then life changed.
Life did a leap about in another direction because of the girl sitting at the front of the bus.
The girl with the magnificent red hair with an absorbency of rich clarity declaring war against cardboard greys, road worn blues and bleached passing parades.
First I must elaborate a little about my weeks prior this bus ride where I began to notice a few people around me with red hair, well mostly females to be exact.
I nearly went up to one young female to tell her that I thought her hair colour was a gift from the Gods.
However I refrained, my truth is I didn’t want her to think I was a crazy person.
I’m not crazy, I’m so very normal that it bores me sometimes to look in the mirror, I just have a little exaggeration hiccup … only sometimes.
My bus red was in my estimations the culmination of all my sightings of redheads.
Her hair was a glossy red rejoicing waterfall down her back.
I wondered if it was the product of genetic inheritance or one of those packet jobs with plastic gloves enclosed and bold font bleats of stunning results.
I did not care, bottle or real it was sensationally red.
No it was more than mere sensational …. her hair was in my imagination the exact colour of a thousand blushing angels.
An embarrassed angel, I bit my lip for the pure divine folly of my comparison.
From that moment I spied her I was beyond the pearly gates in love with this girl’s hair, the girl with the beautiful red hair.
Her hair told me she was a good person.
Ridiculous to presume that a person is good based on their hair but it was true, I know it was the truth for my higher instincts spoke this to me.
If it had been my regular every day instincts I’d have laughed and taken her off my admiration pedestal.
The sunlight filtering through the bus window spoke to me in a cosmic visual dialogue about the virtues of her hair.
It was clear to me that this girl was kind and understood life more than the average girl or commuter traveling home on a Friday arvo.
The bus ambled along collecting more passengers.
As the bus filled the passengers bobbed along to the tempo of the road , their bodies swaying giving me flick glimpses of her perfection.
I knew I was going to get off the same stop as her, I was derelict in common sense.
Following her on foot I was glad to spy that slight lean forward turn of her body telling that she intended to take the stairs down to the train station.
But mercy me before she dipped out of sight what was left of the disappearing sun caught her hair and flamed it up in the passing breeze bequeathing me a view of fiery hair tassels.
At the train station I pretended that I was simply catching my second commute home, nothing more and certainly not a hair stalker, having no idea where the train was headed was a minor fly to pick out of the ointment.
The train scaled along the track making it’s arrival announcement at the station.
Sitting I remained with no urgency in me waiting for Red to move first.
She sat and watched the train doors open and a few bibs and bobs of people muddled out and left the station.
Not a single traveler boarded the metal carriages.
She and I evolved into a scene of two people alone in a train station listening to the soft rumble of a train take smartly to the distance.
Her hair fell to the side which kept my attention so intently I didn’t realize that she was actually saying something to me.
She spoke to me again but her lips … they did not move they had a nothing expression yet she was speaking.
It wasn’t right, I felt an uneasiness crawl with claws around my back.
I looked for salvation in her red hair for the redemption of my calm but the door was wide open to fear.
Her perfect red hair was like living lava down her back, a smoky ambiance filled my lungs and I heard her voice say “breathe, remember to breathe”.
The force of sudden fear shut tight my eyes , a guillotine snap of eyelids.
I didn’t want to look at her face with those lips of nothing but the desire to see the rich reward of her red mane pried open my eyes.
Opening my eyes I was taken in by a red hue hanging around my feet, my lungs heaved in a caustic smokey taste that rubbed the air.
" Stay still mate… just breathe into this…"
The fire burned down most of my apartment block.
I was found unconscious in the building stairwell with just a murmur of life still in my body.
Something had pulled or dragged me into where the dangerous smoke wasn’t as thick with its venom.
I knew what it was.
I was following my red haired angel.

Comments
Oh wow! Great collabe!
Hi Mel
Many thanks for stopping by, it was a fab collab with Anna ….she is such a generous creative talent. :O))
– Arcadia Tempest
collab too!
Yep and that as well ;O)
– Arcadia Tempest
Yes, Wow, was about all I could manage. I think I derailed right at the end. Had to reread than part.
The drawing by Annamora is a big wow as well.
Dick
Hi ya
Isn’t she amazing…. she made this story breathe for me and I am so thankful for her input as I was writing this as well. She is such a gracious bubbler. :O))
– Arcadia Tempest
OH how bloomin brilliant the pair of you
LOVE IT xoxoxoxo
Hi ya Babe
Will definitely being doing more collabs with Anna as she has a wonderful instinct with my words with here paint brush.
Thanks for the vote of appreciation. xxxx
– Arcadia Tempest
Super Duper Now just do 29 more and you have the basis for a great book " – ))
One done and 28 more to go……. could be something of a kinda wonderful me thinks! :)))
– Arcadia Tempest
A most fabulous collaboration. A definite Wow to the both of you. Amazing as always Miss Karen.
Hi Marie
Many thanks for reading this story which as far as posts go I know is a longer piece. Appreciate you time and your so very kind thoughts too. :O))
– Arcadia Tempest
Shivers crawled down my spine reading the ending of this,,(good shivers:)..fantastic!!!
Hi Kable
Many thanks for your shivering good comment here :O))
– Arcadia Tempest
:)
thank you Karen Sue :) this was so much fun again
I feel so thankful to everyone commenting … it has made my day :)
………………….. and ………. ’anna’s art has soul’ … omg …. thank you so much for that note :) means so much
We have done some really wonderful together here me thinks here :O)) xxx
– Arcadia Tempest
Beautiful story, I was mesmerised all the way through. Red hair does that :) Lovely collab, too :)
I love red hair….
I first got the idea for this story from a mum at my son’s school who has the most amazing red hair ( and naturally so I am sure as well)…. I have nearly said to her how much I adore her hair but didn’t and have not seen her since…
I think I will the next time I see her though :O)
– Arcadia Tempest
WOW!!
what imaginations
wonderful simply wonderful
bravo for both of you!!!
peace love and WOW too !!!
Hi Andrea
Collabs are for sure a creative union that I am find inspiring and the bounce between each other creatively always continues to bounce for such a time after….. it really does create an opportunity to see your own ‘work’ differently as well.
Many thanks for your so very kind words :O)) x
– Arcadia Tempest