I have untamed thoughts.
I’ll drive fast razor red cars just so I can screech corners.
I’ll go places I don’t need to be.
Places I don’t really care to be.
When the tyranny of tiredness suckles me to it’s dry saggard breast it‘s not a good time for my karma.
Strapped to a catapult and vaulted over the edge of reasonable reason to a cerulean incubus.
There’s a tapping on my spine as seven tongues lick against my better wishes, my will to be calm curdles up in fear.
There is a tenuous line of fire thoughts with the power to strike the flames of imagination and singe the white lilies of faithfulness.
If any blood amber fluid spills… slush slosh… then I am a wipe out of crashing, crushing coercing fire waves.
I am so fuckn hot in my cool destination.
I have untamed thoughts.
I am a golden dwarf with scarves of iridescent green adoring my body like farewell flags.
I look up and a celestial craft with angels dressed in red wine ochre paint beg me to come with them and seal the rift that threatens eternity.
I close my eyes, leave me alone, I want my thoughts of my own to revisit and adorn me again.
I have untamed thoughts.
I am lying on a bed of nails that inch in to my flesh and accept the regal pain of chastisement.
Inching the desire in to me arousing my thoughts to climb out and find myself again. I am soothed in sweet succulent rose petals that fill the rooms of a white straw mansion.
I am breathless with the scent.
I hear the screech of the car coming again……. I want to hide in my thoughts in the scented heaven but I am too late a malingering thought has suckled in a black rain soaking me with demon marrow cooing to my heart…..
Where is the door?
Help me find my open heart door before I become the dream of no think.
I lace holes in the roof of my mouth to keep my thoughts clear.
Ahh I am ventilated with possibility.
I am the dream magician who has finished tricks.
I am back in my box.
I gobble up the key that has the faint taste of yesterday and tomorrow imaginations.
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FUCK………………… I so needed to read this at this moment in time…………..ADORE your mind and I applaude your very presence xxxxxxxxxxxx
I hear the screech of the car coming again……. I want to hide in my thoughts in the scented heaven but I am too late a malingering thought has suckled in a black rain soaking me with demon marrow cooing to my heart…..
Where is the door?
Help me find my open heart door before I become the dream of no think.
I simply say “thank you” my gorgeous girl xxxxxxxxxxxx
Had way too many lemonades me thinks and this is the result!
And you are so very very kind and such a delight, so glad you found your way to the bubble. xxxx
– Arcadia Tempest
WOW. This is a veritable word feast so full of amazing imagery that I don’t even know where to start. Some of the words are clinging to my thoughts and hanging there for later digestion… :-) xoxoxo
Many thanks Sybille
This is a reworking of something I penned a year ago but was never happy with the flow of it.
It is meant to feel like we have fallen down the rabbit hole and ended up in a very strange and curious place..
I think I may of got some of that happening by your comment here :O))
I thank you for being able to feast here…xxx
– Arcadia Tempest
KS this was fantastic, such writing and atmosphere and tone. So many artistic sentences and evocative descriptions. brilliant
Hi Cathal
Thank you kindly for dropping into this world of illusion. Luckily there was a door to open to find my way out… ;O)
– Arcadia Tempest
Untamed thoughts are our key to freedom :)
I agree….. though we have to make sure our untamed thoughts do not whip others. Have done this myself and the sting of regret last a long time….well it does if you care I guess. xx
– Arcadia Tempest
You speak so well, KS!
Thanks Mel….. nothing boring going on my head! ;O)
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holy wow…………………
amazing imagery
I’m sitting by the window and staring out with your words hanging in my mind
gosh love this xxx
Oh I would just love to sit by a window and hang out with you right now xxx
– Arcadia Tempest
Your untamed thoughts are our treat to read. As Lisa said, amazing imagery. This one will stay with me for a while. xxoo
Hi Rikki….. many thanks for your thoughts on the imagery in this out of mind travelogue ;O)
– Arcadia Tempest
your untamed thoughts lifted my spirits….i thank you….awesome write…i love it…one of my all time favs…
WOW…… thank you sooooo much.
That is a huge compliment.. :O))
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“When the tyranny of tiredness suckles me to it’s dry saggard breast it‘s not a good time” what a freaking visual…..The entire poem was just filled with the images of your words. I was sweep along on your impulsiveness…..
Thanks TR ….that is fabulous observation… the impulsiveness of this.
Being impulsive is sometimes a failing of mine and sometimes a wonderful attribute.. x
– Arcadia Tempest
so intense, I didn’t even notice I was not breathing
you are the master of creating the mood with words KS
awesome writing
Hi Vesna
Your comment “so intense, I didn’t even notice I was not breathing” is something I would like to steal for some of my writing!
Thank you so much x
– Arcadia Tempest