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The Bigger Big Bang Theory Before Star Breath

Wicked delicious loving electrickery
hidden weights in the far out inside universe
Alpha images under half hoping half resolved eyelids
          melting my green irises
               into your purple
                    with the textures of unforgettable desire

Coins tossed splitting up the air
legs slide apart on the fancy tastes of what may come next
         I
          catch
                 The Omega
                        with the tip of my tongue
Necessity has taught one must balance the elements of life

Eclipsed days draw a sympathetic shadow

a lover’s silhouette sleeping on a motionless umbra
One shadow tries to understand the mathematics of loving
Another licks wildly at wandering satellites of heat
          defying
               the dark hours
                        refracting light to bend for the heart
A shadow rebel tries to rewrite the Laws of the Shadow Heart
Love’s conundrum the bigger Big Bang Theory before the star breath of time

© K S Hardy 2010

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“One big bang may say love” She says tongue firmly tucked in cheek ;o)

Feelings and words fall on to the page
Sometimes they bite back
Sometimes they tug on our sleeve
Sometimes they have a cheeky grin
They stay once a page has found them
Words are faithful to us even in the dark

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Comments

  • moyo
    moyoover 4 years ago

    reflections of the time of passion fading into awareness while the lovers slowly grow apart, and necessities having drawn their own eclipses push themselves into focus again.
    i love your descriptions of love, karen sue and i am happy to see them being posted again.

  • Hi Ursa
    This started from a different starting place and ended up with the bigger Big Bang Theory…. the idea found me within the words so to speak..
    Thanking you for your gracious comment on this ’ theory ’ :O) xx

    – Arcadia Tempest

  • sandra22
    sandra22over 4 years ago

    Wow Doll, that is one BIG ‘theory’, tackled in your usual inimatable style:))
    love sandra

  • One Big Bang and a new world may begin ….. ;o) xx

    – Arcadia Tempest

  • Anthea  Slade
    Anthea Sladeover 4 years ago

    Love your BIG theory and how you express this so eloquently with wisdom and wit. I enjoy so much how you reveal the odyssey love and passion with such sensitivity and finesse. Glorious write dear KarenSue.

  • Hi Anthea
    thank you kindly for stopping by and I love how you have seen this as an odyssey…I guess when you have the alpha and the omega it does tend to head in that direction.. ;O)
    Hope life has the curl of sensitivity and kindness for for…xx

    – Arcadia Tempest

  • Ushna Sardar
    Ushna Sardarover 4 years ago

    First of all i really liked the format and impressed with Sue’s skill! then i really liked the way you put words down, so pure and magnificent and third and last thing………. you’ve just gone so well in the end….

    Eclipsed days draw a sympathetic shadow
    a lover’s silhouette sleeping on a motionless umbra
    One shadow tries to understand the mathematics of loving
    Another licks wildly at wandering satellites of heat
    defying
    the dark hours
    refracting light to bend for the heart
    A shadow rebel tries to rewrite the Laws of the Shadow Heart
    Love’s conundrum the bigger Big Bang Theory before the star breath of time

    a big hug Sue! beautifully painted!

  • Wow ….what huge compliments your comments are here Ushna…
    Thank you so very very much …xxx

    – Arcadia Tempest

  • Ushna Sardar
    Ushna Sardarover 4 years ago

  • Big Hugs and many many thank you’s xxx

    – Arcadia Tempest

  • Lisa  Jewell
    Lisa Jewellover 4 years ago

    Oh my
    I am swept up in a luscious emotion
    I can hear and see that big bang

    Each word is measured to perfection.

    So glad to read you my darling
    xxx

  • Hi Ya
    Glad that you are reading me….it is of great comfort that you do..xxx

    – Arcadia Tempest

  • Lisa  Jewell
    Lisa Jewellover 4 years ago

    PS the format rocks :)) xxx

  • Thanx :O))

    – Arcadia Tempest

  • Del Millar
    Del Millarover 4 years ago

    Your mind taking a stunning ride here Karen Sue;fab to read,
    you’ve gone in deep; good to get in and feel these things then express;
    so very human is this piece.
    Congratulations on your feature sweetyheart oxo

  • Hi ya Del
    thanks for stopping to ponder the theory of love with me.
    And your words are so true, I do like to dig in deep when it comes to the human heart light…xxx

    – Arcadia Tempest

  • Rusty Gentry
    Rusty Gentryover 4 years ago

    Wow! “One shadow tries to understand the mathematics of loving
    Another licks wildly at wandering satellites of heat/ defying/the dark hours/refracting light to bend for the heart…” I’ve been know to oscillate between being one or another of those lovers, although I try and for the most part succeed in being the second. What a brilliant way to put it. You KNOW that I love this one, absolutely love it! xo, Rusty

  • Hi Rusty
    you know I actually used to be good at maths…I mean good enough I got put to the top class in my school…..And now yikes I am crappolla…
    So I think it may be time to invent a love calculator to help us out with the equations…
    Thanks for your wonderful comments on this write..xx

    – Arcadia Tempest

  • Rusty Gentry
    Rusty Gentryover 4 years ago

    Karen sue,
    How did you get your formatting to remain as it did? I cannot pull that off to save my damn life. I tried to yesterday, and ended up not posting because I could not. You can B-mail me, if you have help. Love, Rutst

  • Hi
    hope you were able to work it out from my bubble mail. :O)

    – Arcadia Tempest

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