dark fear devil anger passion dance danger seduction
You have been writing for a long time, Anthea, long before RB :)). I like the last line, sending me back to the ‘Once you dance with the devil…’ line. Cool!
Well….the ‘devil’ is the master of deception….better stay alert. Hitler loved his dogs too.
Wow…I am blown away. This was painful. xx
I’ll not read anything else today as beautiful, dark and moving as this! Stunning!
I don’t like it - I LOVE IT!!!
There is a man so crippled by a deep emotional hurt but driven by his strong desires he fantasizes about loving a woman and when he arrives the fear takes over and he becomes this aggressive guy swearing never to feel this pain again so he starts dancing like a devil until the fire in his body has burned until the next time….
NIce piece. Very compelling. RVG
There was no sound. He vanished? Quietly slipped away? Was waiting for an encore visit? Powerful writing Anthea. But She did shove him out the door.
Doesn’t sound like the devil, sounds like a creep. The devil has class and knows how to play someone like a fiddle. This guy was the devil’s reject. Great writing!
There was no sound ….because he lived in her mind……….
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