The water 2009 02 14 poem
translation by T.Klimas
Presentation of my poetry book
The water 2009 02 14 poem belongs to the following groups:
Country BumpkinVanduo atėjo ir išėjo
pieva nustebus žiūrėjo
atsipeikėt negalėjo…
The water ebbed and flowed
The lawn looked on, amazed
And couldn’t get over it …
KristineNora
This brings a smile , is that not the beauty of nature… always astonishing , well done …..k
WJPhotography
Beautiful Antansas :))
Helen Chierego
Haiku? Beautiful!
Antanas replied
yes
Anthea Slade
Stunning and profound words. I always love your fresh view of the world. Wonderful writing Antanas.
Tom Broderick IPA
very good antanas. tom
susi lawson
simply wonderful
Gilberte
Poetic picture Antanas
Cherubtree
Love everything you do! Happy Valentine’s Day!!!
leann55
Soft, lovely and profound! Happy Valentines Day Antanas!!
JacquiK
Just wonderful.
PICMART
lovely work!
EarthGipsy
lol!!!! Brilliant – I’m sitting here cracking up – I reckon we should use that Down Under – in the last few weeks we’ve had cylcones, floods, fires and now the rain is swelling the rivers!!
lol – I’m still cackling! Good one Antanas :-)
sonjas
Wonderful work
cdwork
Clever words
Tibby Steedly
Fantastic!! I love your words.
raymondo
love the words…....
janeymac
fantasticis poem !!!
KateSecretwomen
Stunning!!!!!!!!
woof
great work!!!! :)
the6tees
Great Words and Image Antanas!!
Raindrops
Your words made me pause and inhale & at that moment the world was a beautiful place!
maxy
A stunning Haiku!!! Our lawn is doing that these days with all the snow melt turning to mud season…..(known as spring!) Excellent work!
Mrswillow
You have “painted” a brilliant picture in such well chosen words!
I can really relate to this and so can my lawn!!...In our part of Australia we haven’t had decent rain for years …our lawn is no more ,except in sheltered sections.I know when it rains again the lawn will go into “shock”
Antanas replied
thanks
Lynda Robinson
Yes – I’m with Mrs Willow!!! So many people in Northern Victoria, Australia, will relate to these wonderfully well chosen words! There has been no ebbing or flowing here for years!
Antanas replied
thanks
daffodil
Beautiful words well chosen ! Great work, I appreciate it very much.
Kristin Reynolds 23 days ago
EXCELLENT haiku. wow, that is brilliant.!
Antanas replied 23 days ago
thanks
Brenda Dow 15 days ago
You reach out to us with whatever you write… and you long for us to grasp the ebb and flow….
now we are adoring fans….. applause applause…..
Brenda