The Day Which Never Was 2008 11 01

Antanas
Author: Antanas
Word Count: 365
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The Day Which Never Was 2008 11 01

translation by T.Klimas

Presentation of my poetry book

The Day Which Never Was 2008 11 01 belongs to the following groups:

Country Bumpkin

Somehow I hear his voice, not from the lawn, not from sadness / from somewhere between the worlds of magic
I did not speak, but overspoak, I imagined myself through others and the dandelion field which had turned to one of sedge
Having uttered no word and gone to the river, having abandoned oneself to words, he did not return and … and …
He didn’t want to return, did not plan to, did not prepare to do so, didn’t try, did not promise, did not want to, and could not …
And there was no reason to, because beneath the grass he was already lying, not yet defiled and unrecognized
But already forgotten for that period of time…
And the snow came unexpectedly, the leaves disappeared, I stepped and there was nothing there save for one sole birch tree which stood as it had stood, perhaps only somewhat older, but able to stand and have its eyes open, and it wanted to hear its name But …
That was not what he needed, not what he waited for, no word or hymn, perhaps we could have called him a bard, but
in the snowdrift he knows only that the winter has come and … and … they could have spoken, but did not upon their return.

Kažkaip jo balsą išgirdau, ne pievoje, ne liūdesy \ kažkur ten tarp magijos erdvių
Nekalbėjau bet prisikalbėjau, save per kitus įsivaizdavau ir pienių laukas viksvomis pavirtęs
žodžio netaręs į upę nuėjęs, save žodžiams palikęs, atgal negrįžo ir… ir …
Grįžti nenorėjo, neketino, nesiruošė, nemėgino, nežadėjo, nenorėjo, negalėjo…
O ir reikalo nebuvo nes po velėna jau gulėjo dar neišniekintas ir neatpažintas
Bet jau užmirštas tam laiko tarpui …
Ir sniegas atėjo netikėtai, dingo lapai, žengiau ir ten, bet nieko nebuvo, vien tik beržas vienišas stovėjo kaip stovėjęs, gal šiek tiek pasenęs, bet vis dar galintis stovėti ir akis atmerkęs išgirsti savo vardą norėjo Tik…
Ne to jam reikia, ne to jis laukia, ne žodžio ar giesmės, gal ji dainorium vadint galėjom, bet
pusnyje jis žino vieną, kad žiema atėjo ir… ir … jie galėjo, bet sugrįžę jau nekalbėjo….

  • dazgwen

    dazgwen

    Amazing!!

  • Michelle BarlondSmith

    Michelle Barlo...

    BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO

  • Lori Peters

    Lori Peters

    Antanas, this is one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. It moved me to tears. Great work. XXX

  • Linda  Syms

    Linda Syms

    Wonderful Antanas

  • Helene Kippert

    Helene Kippert

    Profound and beautiful antanas

  • tkrosevear

    tkrosevear

    WOW Antanas, a deeply emotional feeling came over me while reading this…very beautiful !!

  • Magaret Meintjes

    Magaret Meintjes

    I agree with all, just absolutely magic ! thank you so much for sharing it Antanas, well done!

  • Debra Willis

    Debra Willis

    I am lost for words this is so moving…...... very beautiful

  • KimberlyNic

    KimberlyNic

    So deep and the words just flow into each other. Beautifully written!

  • Irene  Burdell

    Irene Burdell

    So moving and very sad . Wonderful words Antanas.

  • Adrian Kent

    Adrian Kent

    Awesome!

  • Rose Moxon

    Rose Moxon

    really wonderful

  • saseoche

    saseoche

    Awesome!!!!

  • Mishaal  Sardar

    Mishaal Sardar

    BRAVO!!! awesome!!!

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar

    Wonderful words my friend Antanas!!! huggles

  • mazzfarrell

    mazzfarrell

    This i like well done

  • Tracey Mac

    Tracey Mac

    Beautiful writing Antanas….and I’ve always loved the image in the snow…....

  • Aurora Pintore

    Aurora Pintore

    VERY BEAUTIFUL AND SAD POEM ANTANAS

  • Agnes McGuinness

    Agnes McGuinness

    Wonderful writing Antanas, such a very moving poem. Agnes:)))

  • Wendy  Slee

    Wendy Slee

    beautiful soul stirring words…

  • Yool

    Yool

    Wonderful job Antanas…..wow!!!!!

  • missmoneypenny

    missmoneypenny

    Very beautiful Antanas

  • WJPhotography

    WJPhotography

    wonderful writing :))

  • jadeast

    jadeast

    Extraordinary!

  • Clive

    Clive

    Truely Superb writing Antanas, and such a beautiful capture to go with it, so very well done my friend

  • vanvic

    vanvic

    Love it!

  • velveteagle

    velveteagle

    Your soul does indeed sing Antanas…
    Chuck…

  • Alexander Gitlits

    Alexander Gitlits

    Excellent work!

  • reflector

    reflector

    Incredible concepts – very deep and searching ! Very well written.

  • clarkey

    clarkey

    An emotional piece of written work and a lovely image to go with it. Well done.

  • janeymac

    janeymac

    excellent , so moving .

  • Antanas

    Antanas

    Thanks all Your for comments

  • Cherubtree

    Cherubtree

    So beautiful!! Your words are like magic etching my heartstrings…and your photo is haunting! I so LOVE your work! Thankyou for all you share!

  • Victoria Jostes

    Victoria Jostes

    in interlude so injected with sadness. the accompanying photo completes the image. you are a master.

  • Keith Reesor

    Keith Reesor

    Stunning works Antanas!!

  • umauma

    umauma

    Beautiful Antanas!

  • Lisa Hewitt

    Lisa Hewitt

    Brought much emotion to me!! Wonderful!

  • Visual   Inspirations

    Visual Inspi...

    Beautifully written.. and the image… is breathtaken!!

  • Gail Bridger

    Gail Bridger

    Your words are so beautiful and well written. I love this picture, lots of character, and the wrtting adds so much more character. I’m glad I purchased it! Thank you!

  • Antanas replied

    :)))

  • Harald Gick

    Harald Gick

    Simply great!

  • John Fish

    John Fish

    this is sensation. love the poetry and photo both. just beautiful and moving

  • nesi

    nesi

    Sublime!!!!!!!!

  • Sean Farragher

    Sean Farragher

    beautifully done

  • Gary L. Suddath

    Gary L. Suddath

    soul stirring and thought provoking….excellent

  • Rosalie Scanlon

    Rosalie Scanlon

    Gorgeous image and wonderful words.

  • owlspook

    owlspook

    perfect and with one of my favorite of you photos (smile)

  • amarica

    amarica

    You have written with such mystery it leaves me wondering what next, great work my friend…hugzzzz

  • Peranchu

    Peranchu

    stunning piece of writing..amazing indeed!

  • daffodil

    daffodil

    Amazing work ! You have written a splendid poem in full harmony with the beautiful winter landscape .

  • Catherine  Howell

    Catherine Howell

    Very beautiful writing and very moving. Exceptional!

  • leann55

    leann55

    Elegant and wonderful!

  • Mrswillow

    Mrswillow

    I need to join the accolades…I am still weeping…this is so beautiful.
    My own words cannot explain how much this has moved me.

  • Antanas replied

    thanks

  • Mary Campbell

    Mary Campbell

    I don’t know how I missed this wonderful poem for so long.. It is just a superb piece of writing.

  • Antanas replied

    thanks

  • Rhenastarr

    Rhenastarr

    Beautifully written. So moving and heartfelt. A splendid companion piece for the image.

  • Antanas replied

    thanks

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