The day 2008 06 23

Author: Antanas
Word Count: 41
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The day met you
It said—thanks
When it embraced itself
It became bewildered

Diena save sutiko
aciu – pasake
pati save apkabinus
amo neteko…

The day 2008 06 23

translation by T.Klimas

Presentation of my poetry book

Al Bourassa, 3 months ago

I am truly at a loss for words.
Lori Peters, 3 months ago

A beautiful poem to go with this picture.
Antanas in reply to Al Bourassa’s comment, 3 months ago

Thanks
Antanas in reply to Lori Peters’s comment, 3 months ago

Thanks
Phil Thomson IPA, 3 months ago

A very beautiful sentiment, expressed so simply and so well and a delightful image to match!!
Anthea Slade, 3 months ago

Words enhance and dance with the image…so simple, yet profound. Love this pair together.
pinkyjain, 3 months ago

Such a lovely image, beautiful writing, too
Henk Stolk, 3 months ago

Beautiful.. the words, the photo.. bravo
Antanas in reply to Phil Thomson IPA’s comment, 3 months ago

Thanks
Antanas in reply to Anthea Slade’s comment, 3 months ago

Thanks
Antanas in reply to pinkyjain’s comment, 3 months ago

Thanks
Antanas in reply to Henk Stolk’s comment, 3 months ago

Thanks
Irene Burdell, 3 months ago

The picture says it all.
Antanas in reply to Irene Burdell’s comment, 3 months ago

Thanks
Elvira, 3 months ago

Arturas, prelest.
Bravo, well done, deep thinking picture and words.
Antanas in reply to Elvira’s comment, 3 months ago

Thanks
Carol & Kev Ha..., 3 months ago

Beautiful image…beautiful words!!!
Stephen Chapple, 3 months ago

Wonderful sentiment to match a beautiful image!
Els Steutel, 3 months ago

lovely words and pictures:)
Catherine Veal, 3 months ago

superb Antanas,x
Tom Broderick IPA, 3 months ago

great work that went with this picture. tom
Silvia Manuela, 3 months ago

Brilliant as always, Antanas :)
Karin Taylor, 3 months ago

something special about this, the image and the prose…great work Antanas
coppertrees, 3 months ago

A great one here both word and photo are strong
Michele Duncan..., 3 months ago

Strong emotions shown through photo and your words! Bravo!
Mia1, 3 months ago

Beautiful. Great job.
Mary Campbell, 3 months ago

Lovely words to go with the image.
linaji, 3 months ago

Wonderful words and image.. beautiful!
Ushna Sardar, 3 months ago

beautiful Antanas!!!!!!!!
Geoff Coleman, 3 months ago

What a whimsical poem – the perfect accompaniment to this candid-style moment of intimacy – what an original talent you are.
RLHall, 3 months ago

Beautiful image and words, well done Antanas
Maureen Bloesch, 3 months ago

very touching….and deep :>))
marcusjohn, 3 months ago

WOW – few words making such an impact !! Awesome Antanas.. Great shot also ;)
RMonroe, 3 months ago

Beautiful:)
gypsykatz, 3 months ago

Beautifully done!!!!!
Sean Farragher, 3 months ago

beautiful
jdmphotography, 3 months ago

Wonderful image brilliant words to match ….................... (-:

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