Twilight Moments

Serene is the twilight hour
when I wait for you to wrap me up
in wordless conversation
comfort me with your calming presence
inspire me with your ethereal aura
simply sit with me as we share the silence
staring through shattered windows
of an erstwhile existence
patiently waiting with firm intent
for swift transportation
to a sacred place in infinite space
exalted, untouched

from the mysterious nebulous shadows
I atone for multiple sins
as you wash the grief from my heart
with clear crystal tears
readily spilling from angel eyes
revitalizing my weary mind
with jubilant rhapsodies
effortlessly dancing upon your lips
sweep me up, raise me on high
to glide along wispy skies
slowly restoring trust
in the truth of kindred spirits

in the crepuscular dimness of dusk
you shelter me as I curl into you
finding safety in your guarded haven
while countless shimmering knights
appear in primordial heavens
the mellifluous song
of raven skies and babbling brooks
lull us into gentle slumber
twinkles picked from effulgent dreams
of sanguine encounters
and lucid memories conceived
under a twilight tree

satisfied magical memories
of twilight moments

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I do love the twilight hour…

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After the fantastic response to the previous informal Word Prompt Challenge I figured we may try a repeat exercise?
The words:
comfort; shattered; presence; safety; infinte;
jubilant; knights; untouched; trust; serene;
gentle; waiting, satisfied, truth

(Optional: shimmering)

Do you feel up to a little challenge?…let’s see what YOU whip up! :-)

No rules apply…only

1. Incorporate all the words (or as many as you possibly can) in no particular order
and
2. Post your write on your page and let me know by BM so I can link all participants here making it easy for visitors to cross-read all participants.
3. Feel free to copy the “challenge details” and add it in the description field of your contribution or link it back to this one

Just have fun!

Please see these fabulous submissions from the following wonderful poets:
Rhonda F. Taylor
Tim Buckley
Tony Wilder
JaneClaire
WildWomanLove
RJColby
Sandra Ellen
Troader
Matt Penfold
Cosimopiro
Soxy Fleming
SimplyRed
Duncan Waldron
Unique Mystique
Abigcat
Rhenastarr

Tags

twilight, serene, nightfall, comfort, word prompt, challenge, group collab

Comments

  • Tony Wilder
    Tony Wilderover 3 years ago

    Absolutely stunning, superb write Anni. I am almost speechless. What wonderful imagery in this most beautiful spiritual account of being. I just don’t have enough words to say how amazing this is for me. Definitely one of your best for me. Wow!

  • Tony, I am so very glad you like this one! It takes me to a special, spiritual place where I can simply ‘be’…fantasy is a wonderful thing, able to take us to magical places…I just love that!
    You may be speechless, but I know you are never wordless, so please join in…let’s see what you’ve got! :-)))
    xx

    – AnniG

  • autumnwind
    autumnwindover 3 years ago

    Wow! Anni, this most beautiful and stunning write and such a perfect video to pair with it. you so inspire me and thank you for the challenge info, as I have not been able to write at all lately. this seemed to have come effortlessly from you and does not be part of a challenge at all! outstanding beauty!
    hugs, shar xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

  • Shar!…soooo happy to see you again! Thank you so much for the wonderful comment and encouraging words.
    Hmmm…we all fall into that awful old writer’s slump sometimes and just need a little leg-up out of there…why not see if you feel up to releasing your pent-up writing energy and give this prompt a go? I would love to see what you make of it…it’s all for fun…no prizes or accolades…just a friendly, fun challenge. (let me know if you feel up to it!)
    lotsoluv
    xxxoooxxx

    – AnniG

  • autumnwind
    autumnwindover 3 years ago

    that was, …does not seem to be part of a challenge… sorry! xo

  • :-)
    xx

    – AnniG

  • Rhonda F.  Taylor
    Rhonda F. Taylorover 3 years ago

    This is so beautifully written, I totally relate to this beautiful place, there is none better. I had to compliment you on such a wonderful write which carried my mind to that wonderful twilight…but now I must depart to go play with the words you provided…what fun!! I shall return…hopefully with a worthy response to the challenge..lol
    Rhonda :)

  • Thank you Rhonda for the fabulous feedback! I am so happy that you decided to partake…in fact, you’re the first one off the mark and did a most marvellous job of it too…well done!
    xxx
    PS…really nice to meet you! :-)

    – AnniG

  • JaneClaire
    JaneClaireover 3 years ago

    Magical. xx

  • Thank you…so nice to see you again!
    xx

    – AnniG

  • vampvamp
    vampvampover 3 years ago

  • FANTABULOUS!! Thank you, Thank you, Ms VampVamp!
    xx

    – AnniG

  • Charmiene Maxwell-batten
    Charmiene Maxw...over 3 years ago

    brilliant writing!

  • Thank you sooo much, Charmiene! (great to see you again!)
    xx

    – AnniG

  • Guy Hoffman (aka creative365)
    Guy Hoffman (a...over 3 years ago

    I don’t know how you do it. Pure and true! Beautiful!

  • LOL…pure fluke, tis all!! My muse goes awol for weeks at end then comes back to flood me with this sort of stuff…but, I love when that happens! :-)
    Thanks for your wonderful encouragement, Guy!
    xx

    – AnniG

  • AndreaEL
    AndreaELover 3 years ago

    CONGRATULATIONS on your feature, amazing work

  • Thank you so much, Andrea!
    xx

    – AnniG

  • SimplyRed
    SimplyRedover 3 years ago

    stunning imagery all the way love this write :)

  • Great to see you…glad you loved it!
    xx

    – AnniG

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