oh no - not poetry

“Poetry … you’r joking”
The girls were aghast. They were being coerced into reading …ginny spat out the word ‘poetry…yukkk’
You see, they all loved to paint or sculpt, act or dance. Thespians all but not into the classics they preferred off the wall art and they knew well how to stretch the mundane into the ridiculous.
They had been raised on the so called great poets and though those past masters have their followers they are not the choice of many young folk and so the dislike extends to all poetry
The young tutor stood his ground and raised his voice to fill the small rehearsal room. He caught their attention with the first line. ‘he lay replete sated naked on her bed’ by the end there was silence. And this does not even rhyme’he said. They were hooked.


annieannie

oh no - not poetry by

another in our flash fiction ‘never ending’ challenge
i waited to see if danny who is not a lover of rhyme would rise to the bait but as he did not post i took up the chance to have my say

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Comments

  • Shoaib .
    Shoaib .4 months ago

    ohhh thats a good line .. maybe your next challenge could be to write the rest of that poem :)
    great work annie

  • thanks shoab but i cheated
    that poem was written 10yrs back
    x

    – annieannie

  • autumnwind
    autumnwind4 months ago

    LOL BRILLIANT! Haha! Well done my sweet! xoxoxoxxoxoxo

  • glad you like it
    the poem is i think on my patch of red bubble somewhere

    – annieannie

  • Arcadia Tempest
    Arcadia Tempest4 months ago

    You clever gal….. a fab story to make poignant point about the merits of art does speak in many ways me thinks :))

  • thanks for comment
    we all have our favourite side of art
    ’tis a vast subject
    xx

    – annieannie

  • yvonca
    yvonca4 months ago

    LOL. so good. :))

  • thanks for stopping by
    glad u like xx

    – annieannie

  • bearwings
    bearwings4 months ago

    I iked the way this gave me an image more than just words on the screen, nicely put together flash piece Annie.

  • thanks trev xx
    a fine comment from a fine gent

    – annieannie