You Make
You make my heart sing,
you make my heart run,
You reassure my scared heart,
you scare me even more
You make me feel loved,
your love can rip me apart
You make me want to learn
your lessons can be fatal
You awaken my dreams,
your dreams are surreal
You touch my soul,
yet your touch is poison
You make me want to say words,
words you cannot hear
You send shivers through me,
shivers that can splinter
You are the soul, the life, the love and the dream
You are my happiness that i fear
You are my reason
You are my heart
Comments
such a passionate write… you put ur heart in this one… i feel it
peace
thank you Shoaib…yes i did
– angelmystique
your words contradict each other, yet not many will be able to contemplate the meaning of your work, but I do and I think you have done a great job! It is emotional indeed, absolutely great!
Hi Jake- yes not many will get it.. the person i wrote it for didnt get it lol… but thanks for understanding and commenting, its appreciated
– angelmystique
Did you show the person this then? I totally get it! And sometimes some people are damn annoying when they dont understand lol
lol beep..yes i showed it to them, he just said ok thats deep…not sure what to say lol
– angelmystique
Haha ruddy men eh!? Lol who needs em?? :)