Heaven Sent

AngelMay
Author: AngelMay
Word Count: 104
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Heaven Sent

Heaven Sent belongs to the following groups:

Creative Poetry Challenges, Freedom In Words & Art and Lifeline

No harp, no wings, my halo’s bent
I know that I was heaven sent
Here I am on earth to dwell
To paint my world
To paint my hell
To paint the beauty that I see
A mirror to the internal me
An evil soul once passed my way
And I painted a picture of him from me
Because I wanted him to see
How he will hang on the walls of eternity
If he did not change his destiny
It was love that changed my enemy
No harp, no wings, my halo’s bent
I know that I was heaven sent.

AngelMay – July 2009

  • raymondoantonio

    raymondoantonio

    BEAUTIFUL WRITING!! YES ,WE ARE ALL FALLEN ANGELS, BUT WE CAN BECOME DIVINE AGAIN!! YOU ARE WELL ON YOUR WAY ANGEL!!! BRAVO! BELLISSIMO!!

  • AngelMay replied

    Thanks, Ray

  • RVRFNX

    RVRFNX

    Absolutely brilliant! Great writing :D!

  • AngelMay replied

    Hello RVRFNX, thankyou for your comment, love your bodyart!

  • autumnwind

    autumnwind

    Beautiful write. love, shar xoxo

  • AngelMay replied

    Thankyou for your comment, much appreciated!

  • Kristin  Reynolds

    Kristin Reynolds

    Divine, my dear, this is amazing. :) well said, love, Kristin :)

  • AngelMay

    AngelMay

    Thanks so much, Kristin!

  • Leon  Walker

    Leon Walker

    Excellent work Lady!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • AngelMay replied

    Hello Leon, thankyou for the comment!

  • Cassidy JK (Ra Or Emraeh)

    Cassidy JK (Ra...

    Oh….goosebumps. Nicely done!

  • AngelMay replied

    Hello Cassidy, thankyou for your comment, goosebumps…wow, that is amazing!

  • Emmahleee

    Emmahleee

    This is sooo good.
    Pefect imagery and wording.

  • AngelMay replied

    Hello Emmahleeeeeeeeeeeeee, thankyou for your comment, love your name, I leave my finger on the e key then backspace!

  • Emmahleee

    Emmahleee

    Lol why thankyou dear!

  • RVRFNX

    RVRFNX

    Thanks for the compliment on the body art. If only I could claim it as my own :)

  • ricardo perez jr

    ricardo perez jr

    this is so beautiful

  • AngelMay replied

    Well, thankyou ricardo perez jr!

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    beautiful work !!!

  • AngelMay replied

    Thankyou for your kind comment, Shoaib.

  • warmsoul

    warmsoul

    This is beautiful

  • AngelMay replied

    Thankyou so much warmsoul!

  • chugginrail

    chugginrail

    wow!! stunning write….

  • AngelMay replied

    Glad you liked it chugginrail, thankyou for your comment!

  • RikkiWoods

    RikkiWoods

    Love the flow and rhyme. Very beautiful poetry.

  • AngelMay replied

    Thanks so much, Rikki!!

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