The Call
This piece was inspired by Artmonger’s Alex II
Thanks Artmonger, writers block is gone.
Third place in The Seduction comp
The Call belongs to the following groups:
!* Dark Cabaret *!, Blood and Mortar, Blood Red - All things vampiric, Canada *4/day & Please Review Rules B4 Submitting*, Light In The Darkness, Monsters Ink, Practising the Dark Arts, Up & Coming Writers and Villains and Villainesses: The darker side...
It’s dark, and cold. Where am I?
I find a hall, rough stone under my feet and along the walls.
There is a light, eerie and red.
I can hear a man speaking but I don’t understand what he is saying.
I head towards the light; it feels like a bad cliché.
If I was dead wouldn’t the light be white?
If it was heaven I guess, maybe the light for hell is red.
As I get closer, his voice touches me.
There is a longing in what he says, but I still don’t understand.
I peek in, not to let him notice me.
He is beautiful.
The cave is bathed in a red light that seems to be coming from everywhere and nowhere.
He calls my name and it sounds very inviting, sensual.
As I step into the room I notice I’m wearing a dress that I wouldn’t be caught dead in on any other day, I match the room.
As I approach him, he offers me a drink.
I accept it not realizing that I was thirsty until then.
A rich wine that I have never tasted before.
This man catches me in an embrace, and as his teeth brush my neck a thought rushes to me.
Hell could never feel like this.
Uncle Artmonger
This is awesome chica!!!
Angel0418 replied
Thanks
RPGesus
love this rendition, very well played
pepper08
wow! wonderful!
Angel0418 replied
thank you
Paul Rees-Jones
Very strong…love it.
Angel0418 replied
Thanks
lightsmith
Sounds rather heavenly to me …..
Angel0418 replied
Yeah me too :)
Damian
Ooo, wonderful. I enjoyed the writing style too.
Angel0418 replied
Thank you
XavierMordant
Interesting and sensual collab.