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Instincts

As I walk the streets of night alone, I wonder.
Why, is it that survival is the only instinct left to humans?
How is it that they can be content with the lives that they are taught to just accept?
Women don’t look for strong mates, and men don’t look for healthy women.
They are content, it disgusts me!
My instincts are better than that, and I am not as alone as I was.
I double back, allowing him to hear me.
For there is only one instinct left to humans, survival.
When they know their life is at risk, the fear kicks in.
Fear is the elixir that adds just the right amount of adrenaline to the blood, like ageing a fine wine.
Tonight this man who stumbled across my path will remember his instincts and realize, a little too late, that not all creatures have forgotten!

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Comments

  • RPGesus
    RPGesusover 5 years ago

    i luv this poem, u really need to start writing more J

  • than give me something to inspire me.. lol

    – Angel0418

  • H Maria Perry
    H Maria Perryover 5 years ago

    Fantastic! Your writing presents images that are so vivid! You should join me as a member of Up & Coming Writers

  • thank you, I have.

    – Angel0418

  • janpiller
    janpillerover 5 years ago

    Why, is it that survival is the only instinct left to humans?

    Nice! You had me with the second line. Very vivid writing!

  • Thanks, vivid seems to happen to me at 2:15 am

    – Angel0418

  • pedroville
    pedrovilleover 5 years ago

    This is a truly great poem, very powerful.

  • Thanks

    – Angel0418

  • ToastedGhost
    ToastedGhostover 5 years ago

    Love the poem
    though I feel as though I am driven by some instinct to create pictures
    Take a quick peek and you’ll see what I mean
    http://www.redbubble.com/people/toastedghost

  • Instincts can do that, thank you

    – Angel0418

  • Cimmerrian
    Cimmerrianover 5 years ago

    Wow ! Excellent poem , powerful message there , very well done !

  • When I wrote it I wasn’t thinking about a message, but I noticed it after I got some sleep. Thank you

    – Angel0418

  • LeviMoore
    LeviMooreover 5 years ago

    Very strong writing.
    Nice ending.
    Had me reading the entire thing to see where you were going.
    Well done.

  • Thanks, all I had for an idea to start was the first line….the rest just kinda happend.

    – Angel0418

  • Jen Cannella
    Jen Cannellaover 5 years ago

    Excellent…powerfull and intuitive writing!

  • Jen Cannella
    Jen Cannellaover 5 years ago

    Hey, welcome to the bubble btw!!

  • Thanks… I really wasn’t gonna post this but I got talked into it.

    – Angel0418

  • Jen Cannella
    Jen Cannellaover 5 years ago

    Glad you did…can’t wait to see more!

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