Hunger

Joe lay silently beside his friend. The water in the rice paddy was warm and smelt a bit like the garden compost his folks used back home. The Viet Cong patrol they had watched approach, was now harboured up ten meters to their front.
When they became separated from the rest of their section during a routine clearing patrol five days ago, they had panicked and kept walking. Carrying only emergency rations, hunger was starting to be a priority for them.
The VC patrol sat quietly, casually watching the surrounding fields and jungle, whilst eating fish and rice from banana-leaf wrapped parcels. The patrol eventually moved on, leaving only bent grass and a couple of banana leaves to mark their passing.
“Do you reckon I can eat Charlie’s left-over’s?” whispered Joe.
“My thoughts exactly” responded his friend as they slithered out of the paddy field towards the vacated enemy position.


Andy Smerdon

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Written as a response to the prompt “can I eat Charlie’s ……….?”

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He likes to think he is a better motorcycle rider than he really is. He also likes to think that he is very cool, riding his long-board skateboard down the street. The truth is, he is an ageing hippy who loves listening to the blues and writing poetry.

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  • annieannie
    annieannie4 months ago

    what a great story
    very visual
    and i was well wrapped in suspense so did not guess
    the way of it
    annie

  • Thank-you Annieannie and thanks for the prompt :)

    – Andy Smerdon

  • Ms N. Chatter
    Ms N. Chatter4 months ago

    Very clever!

  • Thanks Ms N :)

    – Andy Smerdon