Dog In Melbourne
I am not sure of the story behind the dog. It was either walking ( very slowly ) with its master. Or it was an abandoned old dog that was trying to tag along with the woman for company.
This is a reworking of an older shot which I cropped to make this image .
Picture was taken on a Mamiya 645 on ASA 100 film and image has not been altered. The pedestrian blur is because I used a one second exposure.
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evee
looks good :)
Andrew Makowi...
Thanks for looking Evee much appreciated.
Helen Corr
just checked out the first one – the recrop is cool!!! I hadn’t noticed the two guys sitting still in the other one, the contrasting motion here is much more striking …
coffeetea
I love this one. awesome street capture!! susan
Andrew Makowi... replied
Thanks Susan, I was taking photos combining blur and nice tones of the laneway. when the dog and person passed by and I was able to take the shot.
Etoile de Mer
great picture. poor old dog….
Andrew Makowi... replied
Thanks for your comment Louise. Sorry I hadn’t replied earlier but somehow I missed this.
The poor old dog was moving so slowly. I think there are a lot of homeless dogs in Melbourne. They live from handouts and scrounging around resteraunts. They are so good at getting around the city they even stop at traffic lights waiting for the lights to change.
Ps you have a lovely PF
benthebrown
Great shot I love the composition and stillness of the dog…he reallly stands out in the busy laneway. Interesting shot of Melbourne.
Jane Keats
Love the motion!
Mohsen Bayramn...
“Simple” like the Complexity of life…. you’ve done so creative, and what I love the most is it’s feeling. sepia works well, but use of slow shutter speed was one winning point.
Excellent Andy. your works have something to think.
novamarkina
I Love Love Love this photo!
Andrew Makowi... replied
Nova thanks for having a look and commenting.This is one of my favourite photos. What was strange about this photo is I was taking a pic of something different. My camera was on a tripod all set up when the old lady and dog wandered by so I just waited till they were in position and shot.
Damian Harding
great feeling in this..the people blur works so well !
Ralph Olsson
Awesome mate…love it.
Andrew Makowi... replied
Thanks Ralph, this was one of those lucky shots, I was taking a pic of something quite different using a very slow shutter speed when this photo fell into my lap and I took it. Ahh street photos always need an element of luck. All the best
maka1967
Great capture! Love the perspective and movement.
Michelle Boyer
Great image
Andrew Makowi... replied
Thanks Michelle this is one of my favourite images.
My son is an engineer as well, though he is a power engineer.
Andrew Makowi... replied
I was looking through my comments when I realised I had been replying with comments not replies. T
There I was thinking how I was replying fairly quickly
all the best from Andrew
Elana Bailey
Love this image and the movement. It really tells a story. Well done. An instant fav.
Andrew Makowi... replied
Thanks Elana this was a bit of a lucky shot as the dog and old lady walked by me as I was setting up for another shot. On the other hand luck always plays a part in any photo.
Even if we are taking photos of vegies or fruit we may be lucky and find an especially attractive one, Hahha
Dennis Gay
G’day Andy!
I really like the impact this image has on me – the compactness, the movement, the intimacy, the toning, the contrast, the story – all filling the upper portion of the frame.
I do feel though that compositionally the image would look far better and have much more impact and intensity if it were presented in the landscape format.
I know it is a narrow lane but as I stated, all the action is right before your eyes in the upper half and as the eye is drawn right away to the woman’s bright coat, I see no reason for a lead-in, especially when it consists of nothing that backs up the story.
I envisage a 12,11 or 10×8 format, whatever the resolution can handle, which may necessitate removing a strip across the top as well.
I also note the distraction of that disembodied shoulder poking in from out left but that can easily be cloned out OR removed during cropping.
The composition within the “action area” is very good indeed with the dog and woman isolated well from the maddening crowd.
That your stready hand and focus have ensured relatively clear, sharp immobile elements in the scene locks it all together.
An already good street shot with the potentiial to be that much more, in my ‘umble opinion.
GB
Dennis
Andrew Makowi...
I Agree with you entirely that the composition could be better.
I had a lot of trouble with deciding how to compose the image. Look up on page two I have another version of this where I have a person on the right leading into the pic and because of the smaller dog and person the white coat is not that distracting.
I think a problem with this pic is is started out as one pic which was a photo of the hussle of centre lane hence the slow shutter speed and this photo turned up while I was taking the other pics.
I can crop the pic a fair bit more as I used a tripod and the original is about fifity megapixels. so this one is about fifteen mega pics. But medium format lenses are not as sharp as more modern lenses
I might try cropping the foreground so the dog is one third up. This is where our eye is drawn to so the dog is the centre of attention.
Re cropping the top of the photo I think this would take away from the busyness of the Pic. I envisage a dog in a very busy place, taking away the bottom ten or fifteen odd percent should be enough. But I see what you are saying.
Thanks for your comments Dennis
blueeyesjus
I just love this shot, its funny and warm and dynamic and I think the portrait orientation actually serves really well to portray that feeling of intimacy you feel in melbournes lanes..very nice work andy
Andrew Makowi... replied
Thanks Justin, judging from your comment you read Dennis’s advice about the pic. It just shows that there are many different ways of making a picture. I have another version of this pic on page two of my art.
I tried Dennis’s suggestion and it works quite well though I may have to rescan the neg at 4200 DPI so I have approx 12 megapixel cropped image. Or I could just take the bottom ten or twenty percent off. On the other hand lot of people like it as it is and it seems a shame to post another version of it.
I posted this in comments before All the best Justin
Andrew Makowi...
Thanks Justin, judging from your comment you read Dennis’s advice about the pic. It just shows that there are many different ways of making a picture. I have another version of this pic on page two of my art.
I tried Dennis’s suggestion and it works quite well though I may have to rescan the neg at 4200 DPI so I have approx 12 megapixel cropped image. Or I could just take the bottom ten or twenty percent off. On the other hand lot of people like it as it is and it seems a shame to post another version of it.
NatashamenoN P...
Andy I absolutely love your shots of Melbourne. It’s my favourite city in Australia- and I think you capture it beautifully!
Andrew Makowi... replied
Hi Tash I have been a bit slow in replying lately but thank for the comment.
Hope you had a good time at your exhibition.
Jan Cain
i love this image.
BettinaSchwarz
you know, I really like bot the images, each portraying a different feel … the initial shot really does give that busyness hustle and bustle feel – love that shot!
In this more intimate shot we have a totally different subject and I feel the “story” is told incredibly well. I’ve obviously read Denis’ comments and I see what he’s saying … I can’t quite picture it in my mind’s eye, but if you say it works really rather well … :) ... ... and yes – there are always several ways of constructing a shot … perspective is one of those things … ... I’m quite curious about the landscape version now though ;)
Andrew Makowi... replied
Thanks Bettina for looking so closely at this pic. It is nice when someone really looks at a work.
This pic drove me batty as I couldn’t decide how I wanted it to look. First one way then another. But as you said both images look reasonable and are two different pics.
I think Dennis was right in one aspect in that I probably should take a little off the bottom to put the dog in the thirds position. That would make the dog a little more the point of interest.
As a peculiar consequence of cropping the pic even more that is to the extent Dennis is talking about the pic starts becoming more tonal and is a different pic again.
All my best wishes Bettina
Marcel Engels
georgous street photography.
Andrew Makowi... replied
Thanks Marcel, this is one of those pics where I couldn’t decide between a number of different ways to do the pic. Though I think I will probably crop just a little more off this pic in the end
Most people seem to prefer this more intimate version but I like the other version as well. If you haven’t seen it go to the comment above and there is a link to the earlier version.
I am very happy to join you guys. Andrew
Pepijn Sauer
Nice! I’m still waiting to get a good MF camera.
Andrew Makowi... replied
Thanks Pepijin. I got my mediums for about the price of one of the RB 67 lenses ten years ago. There is also a digital back with a very large sensor available for the RB so I can switch from film to digital and back. Though it is still expensive.
Glad to join you Pepijin
docophoto
I was sure that I’d commented on this before it is such a wonderful image.
The fleeting contact or acknowledgment between the woman and the dog, the pace of the city, the warm tone. Excellent image.
Andrew Makowi... replied
Thanks Ilana. I remember the dog kept glancing at the woman and just tagging along.
I think there are a lot of homeless dogs that live in the Melbourne CBD. I saw one recently waiting at the traffic lights for the walk signal to go. It was amazing.
There seem to be less of them on the street now. Maybe the council had a purge or maybe it is just winter. I am hoping winter cause I like these dogs
All the best from Andrew
Mindy McGregor
Great B&W work!
Andrew Makowi... replied
Thanks Mindy this is one of my favorites even though it nearly drove me insane working out how to crop the pic. This was one of those Images that had a number of good pictures in it
Love your PF especially your B & W work.
Andrew Moughti...
Wonderful image, and I love the story. Great quality of depth in every tone. Have to say, I like the composition as the arch at the top and the pavement have a beautiful rhythm… Anyhow, love the photograph!
Andrew Makowi... replied
Thanks Andrew, how I composed this pic was I put the dog on the bottom third and one third in. That is at the point of interest
In the original versions of this pic the point of interest was between the old woman and the dog. Also the pic was about three times the area. So the pic was more about dog and lady in busy city.
This pic nearly drove me nuts because I couldn’t decide which I preferred
Mohsen Bayramn...
I know it’s my second comment on this work… but can’t help myself! one of the most amazing street shots that I’ve seen for so long!
Andrew Makowi... replied
Thanks Mohsen your kind words are especially valued in times like this and your situation.
I look forward to better times when you can post/produce your lovely art again.
Take care of yourself my brother, Andrew
hsien-ku
i love how the dog is the only motionless creature – it’s almost as though he’s watching human hysteria with slight amusement. great shot!
UnEasy
Exquisite – I remember my Mamiya RB – so heavy – the 645 couldn’t have been much lighter. Kudos on an excellent image
Andrew Makowi... replied
Thank you for your kind comment, this is one of my favorite pics.
hahha about the RB they must be one of the heaviest things in the universe. I use my RB for two things, photos at home and weight lifting exercises.
The 645 is quite a different beast and not too bad at all to carry around. I sort of use it like a 35mm camera whenever I don’t feel like shooting digital..
All the best from Andrew
aglaia b
wow
gotta love that.
nice work. ;-)
Andrew Makowi... replied
Thanks Aglaia nice of you to say that. I am a big admirer of your images and love some of your film work.
Sharon Mau
It is beautiful in black and white, wonderful candid work Andrew.
Jean M. Laffitau
Excellent capture!
Andrew Makowi... replied
Thanks Jean a compliment from you is great I am a big admirer of your images.
Elizaday
This is an awesome capture, love the contrast here.
Andrew Makowi... replied
Thanks Eliza this is one of my favorite images. And one I have reworked a lot.
deannedaffy
Love the movement in this image. Bravo
Andrew Makowi... replied
Thanks Deanne,
This was shot on film at a very slow shutter speed with about a one second exposure. I have two other versions of this image. This one is cropped to about a quarter of the original. I still cant decide which I like more its driving me insane hahhah.
rodeorose 28 days ago
Such a beautiful image Andrew, one that will no doubt remain memorable. I was seated at one of the tables on the left shooting the windows you commented on earlier, located high above the Majorca Building entrance. Gotta love this part of town- so much real interest to capture. You do such a great job Andrew of capturing the life. The movement and the still dog have been thoroughly commented on above. It is the posture of the dog that strikes me…he somehow still looks so alone in the crowd, and it is this that really makes this image for me…and your comment that he is perhaps trying to tag along with the lady, but he doesn’t make it quite. An image full of pathos for me. The focus on the dog is so beautifully achieved. Great work.
Andrew Makowi... replied 28 days ago
Thanks for your nice comment Rose it does a lot for my confidence.
I go to centre place quite often love the special light there and the atmosphere. Somehow it always seems special. I might even bump into you though I won’t know who you are heheh.
I think there are a lot of homeless dogs living in Melbourne or at least there were about a year ago. I think they are like orphans or homeless people. They sleep somewhere at night and go around the streets in the day scrounging for food and a bit of love. A couple of times dogs have tagged onto me and walked alongside me for the companionship. It seems a bit sad.
All the best from Andrew
rodeorose 28 days ago
heh heh tall lady with the big camera(usually a sigma 50-500 in tow at least…) usually right next to my gorgeous hubbie…if you see us say hi by all means!! We’ll shout you a coffee and we can enjoy the ambience together mate…why not?
re homeless dogs…see so many in our travels in Europe…not so many here, but this one looks just like that.
cheers dear Andrew, Rosie :))
Andrew Makowi... replied 28 days ago
Tall woman with giant lens and hubbie shouldn’t be too hard to recognise hehhe. If see you I’ll take you up on that coffee.
All the best Rosie.
JudyBJ 26 days ago
Absolutely splendid and i envy your Mamiya :)))
I love street photography and this is a great one
Andrew Makowi... replied 26 days ago
The mamiyas are really good for street photography as you look like a seriously important photographer especially with the RB67 heheh.
People seem not to mind you if you seem important. Set up the tripod and wait and pretty soon I am part of the landscape and invisible.
I think I am going to rework this pic a bit and soften it slightly and crop it a bit larger. This was one of those pics where I know there is a really good image but how to best portray it was difficult in terms of choices.
This image is about fifteen megs down from the original of forty five.
Thanks for your comment Judy I looked through your PF and am a big admirer especially of your street stuff.
JudyBJ 26 days ago
Thank you Andrew.Street photography is my big love.If i had to choose one style and after that i wouldnt be allowed to shoot anything else,it’s street that i would choose.In Israel ,people tend to be a bit paranoid and it’s not easy even to sneak a photo,let alone set up a tripod.
Andrew Makowi... replied 26 days ago
Here is not so bad as there are often films, tv commercial or fashion shoots that type of thing going on. So people are fairly used to cameras and even helpful at times. Though I still often find it terrifying to ask people for their photos. Like a teenage boy asking for their first dance or date.
Street photography rules. Best wishes from Andrew
LauraBroussard 25 days ago
I absolutely LOVE the intentional motion blur…. it adds so much liveliness and dimension to your photo…
This is just fantastic !!!