Place of no gravity

I need to set me free,
To open The door and let me out…

I need to find my ground

In place of no gravity.

Vast emptiness surrounds me.
I stretch my arms and legs
And try to reach to walls,
Or floor,
Or ceiling,
Attach myself to something,
But nothing’s there.

Place full of fog and fear.
And there’s light ahead,
But Which way is Ahead,
I know not.

No signs,
No colour
And no sound.

Just fog,
And stillness,
And fear…


Tatiana R

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  • Christopher  Ewing
    Christopher E...about 4 years ago

    wow..this is beautiful! id be honored if you added it to the fog group :)

  • Tatiana R
    Tatiana Rabout 4 years ago

    Thank you so much for your comment Christopher, I will.

  • Riyllan
    Riyllanabout 4 years ago

    Your words paint pictures
    :-)

  • Thank you for your comment Riyllan, much appreciated, and watchlist.

    – Tatiana R

  • Riyllan
    Riyllanabout 4 years ago

    You are sooooooooooooooo welcome
    :)

  • Dalton Sayre
    Dalton Sayreabout 4 years ago

    THESE WORDS SHOW THAT INNER MATCHES OUTER. BEAUTY THROUGH AND THROUGH! THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR SOUL. I HOPE THAT MY WRITING REACHES SOMEONE THE WAY YOURS REACHES ME.

  • Peter Hill
    Peter Hillover 3 years ago

    Thank you for sharing these thoughts Andromedae :)

  • Cosimo Piro
    Cosimo Piroover 2 years ago

    Wow Tatiana! Great words and image. Beautifully put together.

  • The Jonathan Sloat
    The Jonathan S...over 2 years ago

    Love the poem and the image is perty sweet too!!!