Swimming but drowning
Deep deep down
sunk deep down
swimming but drowning
floating but face down
teeming within
breathing it in
There was never an option
I’ve always taken it slower
but one angel at a time will still be enough
but my angels don’t stand over me
my angels long abandoned their posts
my angels are celebrating
they drink to my fight
they are drunk with my demise
loss can make anything happen
loss is a wildcard trigger of inspiration
or a trigger of helpless desperation
Please don’t stand over me
the pain will make its own decision
Beggars would trade a soul
you could trade it all
and less is more
less is freedom
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Powerful words! you express you emotion so well…..strong work
Very well done…I think free writing must open you up to something…or maybe it is the bean bag chair…lol
swimming but drowning
floating but face down
Great descriptive…well done. Thanks for the BM!
My freewriting was never as good as this:
“loss can make anything happen
loss is a wildcard trigger of inspiration
or a trigger of helpless desperation”
“the pain will make its own decision”
I agree with Paul…great discriptives
Excellent.
I loved this.