Grouchy woman (haiku)

grouchy woman pauses
silently fuming
orchids flop blindly


anaisnais

Grouchy woman (haiku) by

okies, so yes I am aware haiku does not usually have title but necessary for me to catalogue so is as is – sorry if that puts anyones nose out of joint on the subject.

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haiku, grouchy woman, poetry, technique, form, nature, orchids, poem, anaisnais, pembrokeshire

Comments

  • linaji
    linaji2 months ago

    Ha!! brilliant and a big fav

  • lol, glad enjoyed – thankyou for coming by…

    – anaisnais

  • Robin Monroe
    Robin Monroe2 months ago

    oh this is good…love it:)

  • Thankyou Robin, good to see you again…

    – anaisnais

  • Rhenastarr
    Rhenastarr2 months ago

    Brilliantly wonderful!!

  • Appreciated, as ever – thankyou so much! x

    – anaisnais

  • Sassafras
    Sassafras2 months ago

    LOL>>>>my nose is definitely in place….Love this piece.
    Peace, sister…peace,
    ~sass

  • lolol. Gotta be done sorry, how else would we find our works? Glad you enjoyed and thanks for coming by!

    – anaisnais

  • Sue Nichol
    Sue Nichol2 months ago

    Fabulous!

  • Thanks sweetie… Nice to see you!

    – anaisnais

  • kenroome
    kenroome2 months ago

    This is excellent.

  • Thankyou so much for dropping by to leave such a lovely comment!

    – anaisnais

  • VampireLily
    VampireLily2 months ago

    i feel like this at least twice a week….. love it!

  • hehe – don’t we all? Sometimes life seems to enjoy laughing back at us in such situations… Good to see you! Thanks.

    – anaisnais

  • Sassafras
    Sassafras2 months ago

    No, the peace I mentioned was for after the fuming
    NOT instead of the fuming. No , that most assuredly must be done.
    ~sass , sending a hug

  • autumnwind
    autumnwind17 days ago

    LOL LOVE IT! XOXOXOXOXOOX