Cascading heavens,
Gushing waters tumbling down,
effervescence clear.
Torrents force rhythm,
Beauty streaming pressure flows,
Gently roaring tide.
Ripples waves sea,
Picturesque natural views,
rains soul-seeking peace.
Cascading heavens,
Gushing waters tumbling down,
effervescence clear.
Torrents force rhythm,
Beauty streaming pressure flows,
Gently roaring tide.
Ripples waves sea,
Picturesque natural views,
rains soul-seeking peace.
pauldrobertson
this is very elegant. it’s simplicity and meter are worked in such a manner as to somehow evoke water flowing.
i think this is one of the mos tsuccessful poems of nature i have read.
anaisnais
Thanks Paul, you are too kind. I’m glad you appreciated this. It took a little time to pull this one off but I feel it was worth it!