Umbrella
Umbrella belongs to the following groups:
"Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Everyday Life, Graphic Scratch, Love & Romance , The Adult Group, The Sensual Word, The Urban Environment, United Kingdom, Up & Coming Writers and WMGThere she stands
Centre stage for all to see
Tall and slender
Precariously she balances.
I reach out for her
Draw her to me
My hand skims her body
Slowly reaches her skirt.
Playful fingers find hidden areas
Delighted her legs spring forth
Displaying the very beauty
Of her delicately placed, adorned skirt.
Gaily she dances around
Dizzily twisting and turning
In the brightness of day shading
She gently tends to my needs.
Personal ballerina takes to toes leaping
Merrily bobbing up and down
As emotional to her performance
Clouds cry a thousand tears for her.
Reaching our destination
Slightly shaken, she leans
Watches me,
Quietly drips, against the wall.
Reminiscent of the day’s fulfillment
We acknowledge one another, silently
Restful knowing we shall be
One, once more.
Jen Whyte
Absolutely fabulous!!! I totally love this poem!!
Damian
LOL, that’s great! There’s a lot of imagery there :)
Gordon Merrick...
Even without the title, the first thing I thought was: Tight Rope Walker… the way you managed to turn the act so into what sounds like very hot passionate intimacy made me forgot at times. This is one of my favorite ploys in poetry, the extended, multi-layered metaphor… and you do it very well. This is close to some of my poetic stylizations.
anaisnais
Thankyou for your words, this is one of my favourite pieces. It is nice to know someone who has recognition for technique used that can give critical eye and comment accordingly. I shall be sure to return such favour!
Mariska
Thank you for mention this absolutely wonderful piece of poem, fall in love to it….love the imagery , the softnesses , the feminen feeling , clouds cry a thousands tears for her….wow… so inspiring Anna-Marie, you are an awesome talented artist:0))
I have an old work of mine, what is comes in my mind suddenly reading this poem, I would like to ask you please keep your eyes on my site, I am going to dowload it next week.
Rhenastarr
Wonderfully written, a beautiful poem.
Matt Roberts
Another great write (claps) :p