Man, if she could be the one
Only just noticed that if you take the first word from each line of last stanza/verse, you get “The Man with Respect” – how eerie is that when it was totally unintentional at the time and yet so appropriate to the piece?
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! Creative Writing & Poetry !, All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Everyday Life, Light In The Darkness, Live, Love, Dream: , Something To Say, United Kingdom, Up & Coming Writers and WMGTell her you love her,
reassure her
Hold her close and cuddle her
Treasure her
Go see her,
no matter how far away she lives
Always make an effort
let her know she is worthy
Let her know
that she is beautiful to you,
worthy of your love
Hold hands and kiss her
Be unpredictable
send flowers, love cards
tokens of love, letters
and appreciation
Repeatedly
visit her when sick
Be there for her always
Hold her when sad or upset
Do not be afraid
to show your feelings
Nor share your hearts desires
Share secrets with her
Spend time together,
relax, have fun and laugh
Give up your seat,
tidy up and play your part
Open doors for her
Guard every word and breath
Make sure she gets home safe with a call;
better still see her home to the door
If you’d give your life for her
die for her, defend her, protect her
Then wait for her,
however long it takes
The sex can wait
Man, if she could be the one
with whom to share a life-time together
Respect her …
autumnwind
Awesome advice, beautifully written! xoxoxo
anaisnais replied
Thanks Shar. I’d just gotten to thinking how few gentlemen are left in this world today, maybe they should take a peek and step backwards. Rushing into telationships is causing so many of our young people to jump into relationships/or not as it were – just leaving them so ill-prepared for all life has to offer and missing so many opportunities because they rushed things and wouldn’t say no…Girls need claim their right to be respected back, if they can’t respect themselves then how can others likewise? Lets hope this falls in right directions maybe?
Mariska
If you find this gentlemen give me a call, please, lol :0))
Beautiful and romantic thought..hugs.xoxox
anaisnais replied
lol. Yes, you and how many others? Maybe he’d have good friends or brothers…haha oxox
RuthFroehlinger
Superbly said and written. A great piece!
anaisnais replied
Thankyou Ruth, pleased you agree/like….nice to see you…
Rhenastarr
A beautifully written piece.
anaisnais replied
Thankyou, glad you like it, thanks for stopping by to view again….
JaneSolomon
Great one. I’m still lookin’ for him….. ;-) xx
anaisnais replied
You’ll have to jump in the queue, looks like there will be a fight for him….lol. Great to see you here…
Isa Rodriguez
anaisnais replied
Thankyou Isa, everyone…I am most humbled and delighted to see this work featured in your group! Hope you enjoy/find helpful/or find that man~! lol.
Sylvia Gonzales
Wow! Beautiful Writing! Now if we can ship this to Mars, via Fax, internet,subliminal, slingshot,peashooter,I don’t know something!.... We could actually get somewhere….Sorry guys! Not all of You!!!! :0 LOL!!! Peace, syl
anaisnais replied
Lol, thankyou Syl, wonder if we could get it sattelited around the globe? lol. Pleased you stopped by and enjoyed, great to see you here, – twice! lol. xxAnna-Marie.
Sylvia Gonzales
Oh wow….you just got Featured!!!! Congratulations!!!!! Cheers To You!!! syl : )
caradione
congrats on your feature. it is very well deserved, this is a wonderful piece of writing…
so glad it was featured
well done
anaisnais replied
Thankyou so much caradione, so kind of you to both stop by, read and comment, pleased you enjoyed! Anna-Mariexx
Chrissy Rosadoni
georgous, wow you just described my dream man!
anaisnais replied
lol. I think there are many women/ladies who would stand shoulder to shoulder with us saying this is! Great to see you here, hope you will want to read further works… ;’D