An old familiar
Thought I’d compare the familiar snore with the train rattling through the bedroom.
A purposeful ending leaving the reader unsure if I fall asleep straight away – dreaming, or next day by his side relaxing on a beach….
An old familiar belongs to the following groups:
All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, United Kingdom, Up & Coming Writers and WMGAn old familiar,
all too clear;
as you roll on your back
and new tempo appears.
Repeated chug
of train runs through;
no nightmare is this
for it’s all from you.
Constant your whistle,
your engine is stoked;
as I try to disturb you
you snort, gag and choke.
Rolled over your peaceful,
all is quite in our home;
the train in the distance,
Till on rear you do roam.
I love dear dearly
as I lay by your side,
and I’m drifting to sleep now
with sun, sand and tide.
sandraellen
anaisnais—-this is so good, it brings back the ‘snore’ memory, like childbirth, riding a bike etc, you never forget!!
an elbow in the side used to work for me—-hehe
sandra :)
anaisnais replied
lol. I usually gently and briefly hold his nose and he now turns over, thankfully! Appreciate your dropping by to read and comment, thank you!
hilarydougill
wonderfully well done. hugsxxx
anaisnais replied
Aaaww, thank you Hilary. Strange how some of thesewrites form! lol.
Tom Gomez
Imaginative work as always …
anaisnais replied
Thanks Tom, you’re too kind!