Lost Innocence

AmySplash
Author: AmySplash
Word Count: 54
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Lost Innocence

playing with toys lost childhood lost innocence hurting innerchild scared cold and confused no peace no protection in sight scared little girl needing to be held no one wants to get close she is bad she is durty so she holds her teddy and rocks him like she wants for herself

she is unloved

  • jansnow

    jansnow

    So profoundly written Amy, and so sad.

  • Amber Elizabeth Fromm Donais

    Amber Elizabet...

    very nice Amy xxxx and sad I sent you a bamil too xx

  • Arletta

    Arletta

    That was painful!

  • AmySplash replied

    sorry it was painful

  • erika15

    erika15

    this is so deeply painful. I could feel it. Got a little choked up.

  • AmySplash

    AmySplash

    sorry but glad you liked it to add it to your favs thanks

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Oh she is not bad or dirty …... she was used and abused and her innocence was lost as a child.
    My heart goes out to you ….... I hope you can eventually put your hurt to one side and feel alive again!
    This is the best way to rid your guilt feelings and anger in writing lets see some more let it flow!
    - David :>))

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