Subtract O

Amorous  Requiem
Author: Amorous Requiem
Word Count: 79
previous browse writing next

Subtract O

subtract the letter O

Subtract O belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Beginner's Expressions, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Pop Art and Two Beings Group

I inhibit a mouse
take it
use it
try and make
my creativity
shine…
brighter
when I see a mouse
I will take it
keep it captive
Harness
it’s great feelings
joust being it
till I am better
I wanna trap a mouse
taking advantage
using it
as I
want.
till it’s beauty
is mine.
the beauty is a mouse
to take pieces
adapting them
as me.
till I am
with greater beauty
then the mouse itself.

  • Niki Renee

    Niki Renee

    Sweet idea. i like it

  • Amorous Requiem replied

    Aww, thank you very much

  • coppertrees

    coppertrees

    Nice, veery nice

  • Amorous Requiem replied

    thank you, thank you for the nice comment

  • VanSnuG

    VanSnuG

    Awesome

  • Amorous Requiem replied

    wait till it’s finished,
    this is just an idea I had to get out

  • HeatherTS

    HeatherTS

    mice are to be fed upon, so yeah, this was a great choice as far as metaphors go

  • Amorous Requiem replied

    thanks

  • becteri

    becteri

    Nice Work!

  • Amorous Requiem replied

    yeah…? You really think so?
    well, thank you. I’m glad you liked it.

  • Care

    Care

    love where your writing is going : )

  • Amorous Requiem replied

    thank you very much, that comment means alot to me
    coming from you

Add your comment

You need to login or signup to add your comment to this work.

Tags:

inspiration