Citrine Dreams...
white pearl omissions on crimson velvet…
Citrine Dreams... belongs to the following groups:
Complex Simplicity of Art, All Around the Styles, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Art Inspired by Dreams, Core [C.O.R.E], Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Live, Love, Dream: , Midnight Ramblers, The New Beat Generation and Vibration in Art and Verse - VAVoom!I emerged from
A tumbled world
Of lapis lazuli
With sapphire tears
And ruby whispers.
I ran to a crystal river
And sat down beside it
I heard its emerald lullaby sighs
And as the autumn wind
Blew topaz through the trees,
I could hear your
Smoky quartz voice singing
You sang of
Red jasper dreams
And restless nights
I was captivated
By the amethyst music
Hypnotized by the
Turquoise soliloquy.
My cornucopia heart
Overflowed with the
Diamonds it held for you.
I thought about
A Sunday morning
Cup of tourmaline tea,
Carnelian kisses,
Amid breathless hair pulls,
And shameless confessions
Of white pearl omissions
On crimson velvet sheets
You opened my
Garnet-heart and entered;
It was you,
Who animated the
Crazy horse stone,
You brought back
The jaded color
To a black
And white world.
You were a fire opal
In a cold dark cave.
I wandered out into
The bloodstone forest
But my Moonstone
Went out and
I got lost
The green aventurine
That you used
To bring
Left me wondering,
Will I ever
Feel you again?
I was under a cloud
Of black onyx,
Dreaming of you
Wading in a pond
Of rose quartz
And Spinels,
While you
Were holding
A jade bowl
Of Peruvian
blue opals
But these are
Nothing more than
Citrine dreams,
And my blue calcite
Visions are but a
Vanishing coral garden,
Beneath a turbulent
Aquamarine sea
of opaque
obsidian
gems
ambient-1 © 2009
JaneSolomon
So clever and very beautiful. xx
ambient-1 replied
Aw, thanks so much Jane! xx
Christie Moses
Truly a heart wrenching jewel of beautiful sorrow. Prisms of sad blue reflecting in a dark mirror. I felt this in my soul xoxo
ambient-1 replied
Ooh, can I quote you? Thank you Christie for a truly beautiful comment! xoxo
Trenchtownrock
You sang of
Red jasper dreams
And restless nights
I was captivated
By the amethyst music
Hypnotized by the
Turquoise soliloquy.
My cornucopia heart
Overflowed with the
Diamonds it held for you.
I thought about
A Sunday morning
Cup of tourmaline tea,
Carnelian kisses,
Amid breathless hair pulls,
And shameless confessions
Of white pearl omissions
On crimson velvet jeans
I could’ve copied the entire poem in this box..it is that good.
ambient-1 replied
Wow, coming from you that makes me feel so good! Thank you my friend! You made me day!
MagpieMagic
It’s totally fab! Love the way you mixed it all together.
ambient-1 replied
Oh, thank you!
OneForYes
Words to stop one’s heart…this is so very lovely:)
ambient-1 replied
Thank you for the kind words! ;~)
Laurie Search
Oh, this is so moving, sad, and beautiful….
ambient-1 replied
I love sad and beautiful! Thank you Laurie! ;~)
Laurie Search
Me too!! :) You’re very welcome; it’s my pleasure. :)
cosimopiro
This is a real gem of a write. Clever.
ambient-1 replied
Thank you! Lol
hsien-ku
a glittering, profound and marvelous poem! very cleverly crafted!
ambient-1 replied
Thank you for reading it and commenting! Much appreciated!
Lisa Jewell
sigh.................xo
ambient-1 replied
;~)
charliethetramp
stunning ambient….... such a beautifull and soulfull journey into the deeper reaches of emotions…...,such wonderfull artistry explored thro a myraid of crystalline colours and emotions ….it seems to have a musical lament quality within
ambient-1 replied
Thank you Charlie! Your comment is very generous and very appreciated!
Cassidy JK (Ra...
Oh stunning write.
ambient-1 replied
Thanks Cassidy!
April Mansilla 24 days ago
beautiful x
ambient-1 replied 17 days ago
Thank you April! xo
Ushna Sardar 24 days ago
simply beautiful ambi!
ambient-1 replied 17 days ago
Thank you so much Ushna! ;~)
rubyjo 24 days ago
oh wow, love the imagery and flow of this, beautiful. what a “gem” :)
ambient-1 replied 17 days ago
So glad you like it! Thank you!
Erika . 24 days ago
oh this is utterly gorgeous writing Robert! Lovely imagery and very delicious words.
ambient-1 replied 17 days ago
Thanks so much Erika!
linaji 22 days ago
I am still floating.. such an amazing writer you are dear Robert.
ambient-1 replied 13 days ago
Oh, that’s very kind and generous of you linaji ! Thank you!