Stone on a lake

AmandaWitt
Author: AmandaWitt
Word Count: 116
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We all have dreams, wants, desires. Some are short term, achievable goals like wanting to do better at school, or taking a break for much needed r & r.
Others are simply dreams, and shall remain as such – like living in a mansion, with our own private jet or yacht.

Sometimes our dreams are shatterred. This can be from an accident, where people are not the same afterwards.
Other times it’s realising that regardless of how hard we might try, we will not get the results we want, and have to modify our dreams.

My dreams have been shattered before. It’s like throwing a pebble into a lake.
It resonates out and others are affected.

Stone on a lake

Written for the two word challenge.

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  • Madeline M.  Allen

    Madeline M. A..., 2 months ago

    “It resonates out and others are affected.”
    I think we all have had our dreams shattered at times,
    and we have affected all of the people we care about,
    in one way or another.
    Thank God we find more dreams and move on !
    Well written Amanda , I like your style !

  • Tom Broderick IPA

    Tom Broderick IPA, 2 months ago

    sad poem well written. tom

  • Alison Pearce

    Alison Pearce, 2 months ago

    Great prose! Powerful imagery

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