Vision Splendid
It was just a glimpse I caught in the crowd
Not quite enough to fill the gap
Between recognition & deja vu
A momentary flicker of familiarity
A floating reminder . . .
Of someone I once knew . . .
A faded memory struggling for the light
There it is again . . .
No . . .
No, that can’t be right
How could that reflection
Give me such a fright . . .
Comments
Been there…..Love it….
it never ceases to astound me no matter how often i feel i’m the only person in the world feeling the way i am about this or that, there’s a honey like you out there who’s felt exactly the same & indeed “been there”
thanks so much for the feedback
will chat again soon
cheerie bye sweetie
am
– amanda marx
intriguing…a few times i have caught sight of myself in a mirror at the shops in my peripheral vision without realising it was me and thought things like “surly cow,” “bloody hippy.”….excellent writing AM : )
Thanks Tania
that’s exactly the scenario i had in mind
added to which Miss A can catch me by surprise from time to time
cheerie bye sweetie
– amanda marx
I love your writing style .. succinct, poetic, brilliant
thanks Jayne . . . will share the subtext of this one with you one day
cheers sweetie
– amanda marx
Love it! Says lots in a few words. :-)
thank you so much enivea, there is a lot going on between those few lines . . . i look forward to reading your writing sweetie
xXx
– amanda marx
Love it!… I have had this happen, best I could describe it was a “chilly exhilaration”.
probably de ja vu,or some kind of strange kind of synchronicity
but most definately a splendid vision tho! amanda
And suddenly, there we are…realizing that the others may have a different image of ourselves……or is it the real one?
We are so many people…………… GP
hey thats cool!!!!!!!!! gota love it wen that happens ;) Great Work!!
EXCELLENT WRITING
thank you keith
cheers
am
– amanda marx
wonderful !!!!!