The Girl Who Changed My World
You took my cold, stony heart
And turned it back to flesh
You ventured through the darkness
To pull me from the brink of Death
You sowed Faith and Hope and Love
In a land where there was none
You held me by the hand
Taught me to walk instead of run
You showed me how to trust
And helped me find meaning in this life
You brushed away my tears
And chased away my strife
You comforted me when I was down
For you I’d gladly do the same
You exposed me to The Light
And freed me from my shame
You gave me words of wisdom
When it was wisdom that I lacked
You were always with me
You never turned your back
You made this heart adore you
Showed me the beauty that laid in Truth
You fumbled with your words
When it was just me and you
You were always gentle
That I cannot deny
You were the only person
I met who would never lie
Now I’m afraid, my love,
That we have reached the end.
The road has forked before us,
But I’m sure we’ll meet again.
Comments
wow! this is very powerful. I really love this.
Thank you so much friend! I’m glad you liked it! There’s something.. Almost spiritual about saying goodbye to someone you love. It’s the hardest thing to do. In my personal experiences anyways. Well, God bless you friend. Thank you so much for your time.
– AlteredMind
beautiful and touching:)
Thank you! There’s something soothing about finally saying your true feelings about something/someone. It’s just amazing when the truth isn’t hidden. Hope you have a great day!
– AlteredMind
Truth is best when shouted from the mountain tops …. every lamp is set ablaze to be set on a lampstand and not under the bed , JC once said
Truth is a freeing thing. And the enemy hates it. For when we walk in truth the enemy has no footholds.
– AlteredMind
Such kind words… I don’t even know what to say, but I’m so glad I got to be a part of your life and get to know you and share some of the truth and light that I’ve picked up along the way..:> You’re worth it. Even with the pain and confusion I’ve had, you’re worth it. <3
Sometimes the truth is just too incredible. Thank you. For everything. You truly changed my entire life. You’re absolutely amazing. In every way conceivable. You just.. Defy logic. You’re perfect. <3 Oh Purity.. Ich liebe dich. <3
– AlteredMind
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Sep 7, 2011
Thank you so much! This is a very emotional poem for me. Parting with a love is never an easy thing but it doesn’t have to be a negative thing. God bless you.
– AlteredMind