Walls
Walls belongs to the following groups:
"Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Parallel Dimensions, Something To Say, The Sensual Word, The Word Tree, Up & Coming Writers and WMGYour complexity astounds me,
Beyond comprehension.
But there are times,
Though few and seldom seen,
Where I get to see,
The romantic side of thee,
That you keep hidden,
Deep behind those walls,
That you built,
To hold at bay,
The many heartbreaks,
You’ve had,
That come your way.
But it shines,
With a brilliance,
Unsurpassed,
A longing for a love,
That may finally last,
And truly,
Those walls…
You need no more.
CLiPiCs
oh man what words
you amaze me yet again Binh
Love ‘N’ Laughter Kriss
AlteredMind replied
As always. You’re too kind Kriss. =)
silverstrummer...
Beautifully written …...... its nice to see that you are enjoying RB – David
“But it shines,
With a brilliance,
Unsurpassed,”
AlteredMind replied
Thank you David. It was a hard idea to describe but I’m glad that you as well as the other RB members think I didn’t do too horrible of a job. =D
MyheART
Beautiful poetry…I can relate…I know all about walls(smile):)
AlteredMind replied
Thank you Robin, I’m learning about walls. I tore mine down a long time ago but it’s a little different now that I’m on the outside trying to see in. =)
Olga
Wonderfully expressed thought. Great job!
AlteredMind replied
Thank you so much, this poem means a lot to me. =)
AlteredMind
Thank you so much everyone! I know I haven’t been posting as much but right now I’m.. for lack of better words.. being inspired. The events in my life at this point in time are so amazing that I know I’ll be writing about them for years to come. And I am more than happy to share that with the RB community. I’ll try to get it all up here as soon as possible. Thanks again. =)
MyheART
all the best to you on that wall…and look forward to seeing more of your work…you write very well:)
AlteredMind replied
Thank you very much. And I have much to share. I’m glad that you will be checking out my future works. =)
Leda D
i love this! a great peice.
AlteredMind replied
Thank you so much, I’m glad that you enjoyed reading it. =)
AlteredMind
Thanks once again to everyone. And for those who are interested I’m also in the works of creating a long running series of journal entries about my views on life and the many aspects of it. I hope that everyone will check it out and at least see where I’m coming from. Trust me, I have much to share with you all. =)
AFogArty
We will be watching you!, oh yeah and great piece.