Warning

Lena glanced at herself in the mirror, looked away and then quickly glanced back again. She stared, unable to believe her eyes.
The young woman looking out of the mirror was tall and statuesque. Her eyes, hair and nose were just like Lena’s, but with none of the gangling awkwardness of growing limbs and the puffy cheeks of a child.
She could have been Lena’s older sister.
But Lena didn’t have a sister.
And if she did, Lena somehow didn’t think that her sister would have to live on the other side of the mirror.
Silently they watched each other for several minutes. Lena’s eyes were wary. The woman’s eyes were sad.
Lena put her hands behind her back and pinched her wrist.
Yep. She was awake.
Slowly she brought one hand around and placed her palm on the mirror. The woman raised her own hand and laid it against Lena’s.
‘Are you real?’ Lena whispered.
‘I hope I won’t be.’
Lena frowned at the odd reply. Wasn’t the experience strange enough without the mirror woman giving answers to Lena’s questions that made no sense?
‘What do you mean?’ Lena demanded curtly, ‘and what do you want. Today’s a special day and you’re making me very uncomfortable.’
‘I know. Today we turn twelve.’
We?, Lena thought, If I’m going to go mad, can it not be on my birthday, please, Jesus?
Mama always said that Lena was a bit crazy and that she should pray more. Now seemed like a good time to do some serious praying.
‘Will you go away, Lady? You are starting to scare me.’
‘I will go,’ the mirror woman said slowly, a tear leaking from the corner of her eye which slid down the long, thin nose so like Lena’s, ‘but first… promise me something.’
Sighing impatiently, Lena nodded, ‘Okay. What is it?’
‘No matter what happens, or what anyone says to you, don’t get in the Headmaster’s car.’
‘What kind of thing is that to ask? Why would I need to get in his car?’
‘Exactly. There is no reason, so don’t get in.’

© Alison Pearce
First written 2008
Edited June 2010


Alison Pearce

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For Star Twister’s Challenge #71

Prompt – Mirrors

Word Count – 350

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Logan based writer, poet and artist. I seek with the pen and the brush. I think and it rolls out into words or strokes. I believe my writing should paint a picture and that my art should tell a story. I’m an uncomplicated woman in a very complicated way.

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  • Light-Rain
    Light-Rainalmost 2 years ago

    I liked this, had a brilliant twist

  • Thank you :)

    – Alison Pearce

  • Zolton
    Zoltonalmost 2 years ago

    That was giving me chills. Urg! I like your story : )

  • Thanks Zo :)

    – Alison Pearce

  • Jim Hall
    Jim Hallalmost 2 years ago

    Brilliant, once again! And it gave me chills too! I think you’ve got the feel of this “magic” in the mirror thing! It’s going to be tough to beat you in this star twister! Good one! JH

  • Thanks Jim :) Had another idea but went way over the word limit!!

    – Alison Pearce

  • CDeblin
    CDeblinalmost 2 years ago

    Hi Alison – yep – CREEPY!
    (Now is ‘Lena’ talking to her split personality that is the ‘grown up’ side of Lena or is there actually a ‘woman’ on the other side of the mirror – perhaps previously, at the same age, been driven by ‘the headmaster’ hence her warning? Parallel universe perhaps? Hmmmmm…. CREEPY!!)
    Great read as usual and I agree with JH – difficult TTST – AGAIN!!!!!!!!!

  • Thanks Cobie :) Interpretation up to you!

    – Alison Pearce

  • KMorral
    KMorralalmost 2 years ago

    Ooo, creepy twist. Another great idea- the ghost in the mirror….or CDeblin has a point, perhaps her concionce/ mature personality…? It doesn’t matter, the subject is powerful intense and fabulously written, but I want to know if she listens now?!

  • Don’t know K, haven’t thought past there!!

    – Alison Pearce

  • zoequixote
    zoequixotealmost 2 years ago

    creepy,
    one should never get in the headmaster’s car…

  • Too true

    – Alison Pearce

  • Zolton
    Zoltonalmost 2 years ago

    Ta da!!!!

  • Thanks Zo :)

    – Alison Pearce

  • Jim Hall
    Jim Hallalmost 2 years ago

    Congrats on your win! You’re getting to be too tough for me! (chuckle!) Your work is like a lighthouse that shows the way for others who are drifting! Wish I could write like you! JH

  • You are way too kind! Thanks Jim :)

    – Alison Pearce

  • Janis Zroback
    Janis Zrobackalmost 2 years ago

    Powerful work Alison….what an incredible way to tell such a compelling story…..

  • Thank you :)

    – Alison Pearce

  • Pooh
    Poohalmost 2 years ago

    Wow, the hairs on the back of my neck stood up, so intriguing also shame about the word count, I was so getting into it and I so want to find out, how … when … why, concerning the ’headmaster’s car’. I loved it.

  • LOl! Thanks so much :)

    – Alison Pearce