Orichalcum

Alison Pearce
Author: Alison Pearce
Word Count: 366
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Orichalcum

For Star Twisters Challenge #50

Prompt – Precious Metal

Word count – 350

Orichalcum belongs to the following groups:

Crime Time, If it doesn't belong, Safe Haven, Short stories - Spherical Scriptings, Twisted Tales, Who are YOU to Judge? and WMG

‘I’m surprised to have the head of the department deliver the results in person, Cob.’
Professor Cob Stanley gazed across the desk at his client, ‘I am intrigued by your sample, Trevor. Professional curiosity has me in its grip,’ Cob acknowledged, ‘The sample is completely alien to everything we know. I’m very interested in where you procured it from?’
Trevor Call’s brows furrowed, ‘Outline your findings first, please.’
‘It is a metal – a crystalline metal. It shows many of the characteristic properties of both titanium and diamonds. We discovered that the metal was malleable and highly conductive. It also gave off a massive electromagnetic charge. The results were astonishing. More than that, I cannot give without knowing its origins or of how big a deposit there is.’
Trevor studied the scientist thoughtfully. After a moment, he nodded before rising to extract a small wooden box from the wall safe. He placed the box gently in front of Cob and then perched on the edge of his desk.
Cob opened the box and lifted the tiny statue within from its velvet bed, ‘Poseidon,’ he whispered.
‘Exactly,’ Trevor smiled, ‘I found this on a dive off Bimini.’
‘Near the Bimini Road? Are you are saying…?’
Trevor grinned, glad to share his discovery with someone who could appreciate its value.
‘Note the inscription. “_Orichalcum, the gift of Poseidon, giver of power_”! This is Atlantis’ fabled energy source. A limitless supply of clean, cheap energy. People would kill for it!’
‘Yes. They would.’
Trevor felt the hairs on the back of his neck rise at the odd inflection in the Professor’s tone. Turning, he saw the heavy paperweight in Cob Stanley’s hand too late. He raised his arms in a belated and feeble attempt to ward off the heavy blow to his head.
When Cob spoke, the words came to Trevor as though from a great distance.
‘Sorry, Trevor. It is much too dangerous an object to be entrusted to a politician. Especially not a world leader.’
As his eyes closed for the final time, Trevor knew that Cob had spoken the truth.

© Alison Pearce 2009

  • coppertrees

    coppertrees

    Oh how intertaining Alison, I love your stories. They ahve such a flare to them and twists that are awesoome.

  • Alison Pearce replied

    Thank you Vickie :)

  • tkrosevear

    tkrosevear

    Wowser sis, you are a twisted storyteller to be sure, love the Antlantean twist ;) xoxox ♥

  • Alison Pearce replied

    Thanks Tammy :) When I saw the prompt was about precious metals, I just couldn’t resist a story about this enigmatic substance

  • Matt Penfold

    Matt Penfold

    Good one Alison, a classy piece of writing indeed, you really told the story and painted the picture :-)

  • Alison Pearce replied

    Thank you so much Matt :)

  • Jeannette Sheehy

    Jeannette Sheehy

    excellent Alison! How sad that politicians cannot be trusted with something that would be so good for the world. Love the ending .:)

  • Alison Pearce replied

    Thanks Jeanette :)

  • oscarelizondo

    oscarelizondo

    Fits right in yesterdays society, todays, and the future, power in the wrong hands means trouble. Love it, entertaining and a twist to rock me over my chair. Nice !

  • Alison Pearce replied

    Thanks Oscar :)

  • Solar Zorra

    Solar Zorra

    Great story, I wish it were true…..to find the ultimate power source would be amazing. :) SZ

  • Alison Pearce replied

    I agree :) Thanks for reading Solar

  • JRGarland

    JRGarland

    Great work! You’ve captured the fears of society. Well done.

  • Alison Pearce replied

    Thank you so much JR

  • ArcadiaTempest

    ArcadiaTempest

    Twister with social comment, mystery, murdery, intrigue….brilliant!

  • Alison Pearce replied

    Thank you :)

  • ArcadiaTempest

    ArcadiaTempest

    LOL…... murdery….!

  • Alison Pearce replied

    LOL! I didn’t notice til you pointed it out! Great word to keep in mind :)

  • Damian

    Damian

    Cool idea Alison, interesting to play with the properties of things and imagine how they’d react :)

  • Alison Pearce replied

    Thanks Damian :)

  • anya

    anya

    This sounds like the beginning to a good gripping thriller. Great write.

  • Alison Pearce replied

    Thank you Anya :)

  • filfil

    filfil

    All I can say is Cool!

  • Alison Pearce replied

    Thank you :)

  • Jim Hall

    Jim Hall

    You’ve done it again, and there goes my chances too! He he! I suspect that the substance you describe already has been discovered, but is being kept away from prying eyes. Great story! JH

  • Alison Pearce replied

    Don’t be so sure about those chances of yours Jim! Thanks for a great comment :)

  • Zolton

    Zolton

    This is the start of an Indiana Jones movie!! ha ha. Very cool, indeed!

  • Alison Pearce replied

    If only my attention span was long enough to finish any bloody thing!! Thanks Zolton :)

  • Bob Fox

    Bob Fox

    I like the writing a lot!

  • Alison Pearce replied

    Thanks Bob :)

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