The Silver Lining

alfie
Author: alfie
Word Count: 16
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The Silver Lining

I lost the dream
but gained some peace.
I failed my mission
but found some rest.

  • kamel

    kamel

    the contrary could be als interesting

  • alfie replied

    that’s true …. and an interesting point, you’ve got me thinking now … (I’ve only just realised that replying to a comment personally is different from just adding a comment!)

  • alfie

    alfie

    that’s true …. and an interesting point, you’ve got me thinking now …

  • liesbeth

    liesbeth

    if you can honestly say this.. you’ve allready come so far..

  • alfie replied

    wow – what a lovely angle to put on this – thank you big time, alfie

  • kamel

    kamel

    sure It happens sometimes

  • alfie replied

    hi Kamel, it’s now about a year on from writing this poem and I am so wonderfully surprised at my healing since then. : )

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dreams, lies, love, peace, poem, relief and rest