Godkeeper map of what's where ...... by Alenka Co

Alenka Co

Godkeeper map of what's where ...... by

a rough indication of the main locations of the story

Woomera Detention Centre: where the story began …… was a real life detention centre for refugees, as was Baxter ….. I thought it fitting to use these two black spots in Australia’s history for ‘inbetween’ and ‘The Godkeeper’.

Baxter: old Central Command base where Sam is quarantined, where Ana, Jimmy and five other children have been hiding.

GOD underground research facility in the middle of the desert.

Raven’s mountain and the valley where the community found refuge are two places that do not exist in South Australia …… I put my home mountain and valley from Tasmania there for the story.

The city where George, Venus and Professor Higgins run the medical centre.

Shack on the beach which was used in ‘inbetween’ and hasn’t been used yet in ‘The Godkeeper’.

The photos I’ve used are photos taken in these locations ….. the desert, the beach, the city, the mountains, the valleys ……

below, chapter 31 from ‘The Godkeeper’ – the second book in the series ‘inbetween’ …… fiction set in one day tomorrow, with a touch of fantasy

chapter 1

The wind gusted, the kite lifted, tugging at the string. A simple construction of two sticks, a sheet of paper and string with paper tassels for the tail. Years since he’d flown one, an indication of its simplicity that he remembered how to make it.

Now to see if it enticed any of the others to come above-ground. Sam waited, listened to the wind flapping with the kite, then to the sound of footsteps coming up behind him.

He recognised Ana’s light little steps, the others were those of a bigger, more cautious child. Both stopped a short distance behind him. Sam continued playing the kite against the wind, didn’t acknowledge their presence. They were curious, fascinated by the kite, just as he had hoped they would be. He could feel their awe and wonder, the feeling children have when the world is still full of magic.

“You gotta give it more line,” the boy said. “Let it go higher.”

Sam held out his hand, offering the string to the boy.

A slight hesitation before the boy stepped forward, took the string, played out more line, feeling the wind, letting the kite soar. He glanced at Sam. “I’m Jimmy,” he said. “She’s Ana.”

Sam nodded. He knew their names without being told. “I’m Sam.”

Ana had edged closer to him and now took his hand. He felt her contentment, a warm, satisfied glow that radiated from her. The child was pleased. Had she persuaded Jimmy to come above-ground with her? Convinced him that the man playing with the kite meant them no harm.

Sam shared her feeling of self-satisfaction. In time, the rest of the children would come above ground. Of their own accord, when they were ready. As long as Dan and the other adults in his parents’ community didn’t try to rush things, didn’t interfere by doing what they thought was best for these children. They didn’t know what was best, Sam did. He could hear the heartbeat of each child, feel its deepest fears and insecurities, know what it longed for. Ana longed for a grown-up to love her like a mother and father would. Jimmy ….. Sam studied the boy, the smile on his face as he played the wind with the kite, the longing in his heart for his big brother’s return ……

Sam was Ana’s grown-up, he would be Jimmy’s big brother. The community would have to wait until these children were ready to join it.

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  • abigcat
    abigcat10 months ago

    A cartographer as well I see LOL This is very interesting Thank you :)) And how was Sally in the city?
    Was/is Woomera also a nuclear site? I seem to recall something from ’ In between’.
    I should do my own research on Australia, that’s a whole other thing….over to you for the continuation :-))

  • Maralinga, further north-west (hmmm …. GOD’s site …….) ….. another very black spot in Australia’s history, where the British did nuclear testing in the desert. Woomera was weapons research, and recently it was thought a fitting place to dump people seeking asylum in a razor-wired detention centre.

    Haven’t got back to Sally yet ….. I’m having to read the story so far, work out where and what everyone is :)

    – Alenka Co

  • abigcat
    abigcat10 months ago

    Glad to know you’re reading the story, hope you’re enjoying it LOL.
    The electronics here are a little weird right now, I’ve somehow managed to erase my continuing synopsis of this so will have to start at the beginning again so if you notice a lot of hits it’s probably me.
    Ravens’ kiss cure is interesting, I’m wondering if it lies within the cold bug or something from her body itself ? she was originally going to be a ‘bad ass’, or am I wrong? I have to read back and discover the evolution of all these characters as my questions are perhaps getting way out there :-))

  • The writer has to re-read, rewrite, not the reader :) I can just give you the answers to any bits you’ve forgotten rather than you reading the whole thing. Besides, you might find it not so good on the second read :)
    Sally was the ‘bad ass’, Raven was happy to live on the mountain with Sage, just the two of them, but life doesn’t allow that. She carries a strain of cold virus. This cold virus mutated as a result of the nanotech transfuse from Sage which saved her when she was dying from radiation and which made her an inbetween a human and a modified. Fury and Rosie were also saved with nanotech transfuses so are also inbetweens. Raven is the only one who can render the GOD virus benign with a kiss …… Fury is a dog and doesn’t have the cold virus, Rosie is a child born after the testing of GOD changed everything and doesn’t have a cold virus. The transfuse of nanotech was from Raphael, when the baby Rosie was dying. So, to answer your question, Raven’s kiss cure lies in her nanotech cold virus which creates a symbiosis with the GOD virus, rendering the malign benign. Clear as mud? :)

    – Alenka Co

  • abigcat
    abigcat10 months ago

    :-))
    Digesting :-))

  • KMorral
    KMorral10 months ago

    I love the simplicity of this map, and the way you have created the compass points! I have often debated about creating maps for my plots, and this is such a clever way of doing it…must make note!

  • After David suggested a map would be helpful, I went looking for the means to make one. Scanned a map of Australia, then of South Australia, and all looked too real. Went looking for paper, white was all I had, then saw the package RB sent a calender in. A piece had ripped away so I used that. I had the compass points on the land, thought it looked crowded, so once I’d scanned the image I cloned the letters and a bit of the paper they were written on away from the land mass. Rough and basic :)

    – Alenka Co

  • KMorral
    KMorral10 months ago

    But very effective! Rustic and simple- typical I would have thought of a survivors map.