Slyvia
We are made of earth, constantly
Evolving to external pressure
Reshaping the lines of our bodies and our minds
Volcanic
Disruptive
Sensitive to subtle magnetic waves
Sylvia
You and I are made of dark stones
Brittle obsidian
Delicate jet
Rare onyx black as the sky without a moon.
sharp edged, beautiful
And easily
Broken.
Comments
this poem moves beautifully – describing these friends first with heavy images of earth & moon, and then artfully expressing their ultimate fragility. a fine piece of work, words perfectly chosen.
Wonderful Poem…keep it up !!!!