There was...

Actively I wait and watch;
Deconstructing time.
Travel without movement.
Lost in every moment;
Grasping;
The tangents snake,
And ladders lost to direction tempt me further.
Ideas and notions;
Figments.
My imagination mixes with reality,
softly fading to gray.
After thoughts, meant-to’s, shoulda’s and coulda’s collide.
In an instant,
Chaos where there was none.


Ajeet

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  • Jim Finigan
    Jim Finiganabout 2 years ago

    FAN-BLOODY-TASTIC!!!! WELCOME ABOARD!!!

  • thanks so much Jim for pointing me towards this great site and of course your enthusiastic encouragement. Cheers brother!

    – Ajeet

  • webbie
    webbieabout 2 years ago

    Great job Ajeet,and welcome to RedBubble:)

  • Thank you very much webbie. I’m very glad to be here.

    – Ajeet

  • Johny Angel
    Johny Angelabout 2 years ago

    feeling it man.

  • Thank you very much Johny.

    – Ajeet

  • LisaBeth
    LisaBethabout 2 years ago

    welcome!! enjoy your time at RB.

  • Thanks LisaBeth! So far a great experience here. I look forward to much more.

    – Ajeet

  • Bill Brouard
    Bill Brouardabout 2 years ago

    Lovely work Ajeet :)

  • Thank you Bill. Your comment means a lot to me, and I appreciate the encouragement.

    – Ajeet

  • janeymac
    janeymacabout 2 years ago

    great work

  • I truly appreciate the sentiment janeymac. Thanks again for taking the time to say hello.

    – Ajeet

  • banrai
    banraiabout 2 years ago

    yes indeed! superb writing

  • I feel so blessed to be getting such feed back. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and to comment banrai.

    – Ajeet

  • RaOrEmraeh
    RaOrEmraehabout 2 years ago

    Excellent write. Welcome to RB.

  • I’m so very glad to be here and thank you for your sincere remark Cassidy.

    – Ajeet

  • James Watson
    James Watsonabout 2 years ago

    I love this piece!
    NEED MORE.

  • Hehe, You flatter me James. I will definitely have more to share in the not to distant future. I hope they meet your need :) Cheers!

    – Ajeet

  • Ajeet
    Ajeetabout 2 years ago

    Again, thank you to all that have taken the time to read my work and especially to all those that have taken the time to comment and show me the importance of feedback and support. I hope to continue to show good work and hear your future comments. Cheers!