afthi

unshining by afthi

Posted on February 28, 2007

it’s too early for a Sunday morning

awake, lying in the bones of a week

the days are too regular, too hurried and unshining

they come on and on like slanted rain in my face

blinding me to things remaining simple

there are lessons to be found, somewhere

hidden in the rubble of me, in the playground

behind the ageless school of existence

- – -

I spend these hours absent of eloquence

missing the flavour of red roses

and green grasses and purple bruises

staying instead to be help to the masses

holding them back from themselves

being the razor to their stubble

a smile and kind words to their darkness

concealing all darknesses of my own

- – -

(ten word challenge)

2006

  • Pilgrim

    Pilgrim

    Do we smell the rose or wirte abou it, live our lives or watch them. Beautiful work.

  • davecurtain

    davecurtain

    reading this it seems to me that these could work quite well as song lyrics over the top of some minimal beats. nice.

  • helene

    helene

    Beautiful and eloquent.

  • Bridget a'Beckett

    Bridget a'Beckett

    Absolutely beautiful afthi. Excited to find you on here…I love your writing.

  • Philosophy Lee

    Philosophy Lee

    Where the heck have you been??? :)

    “being the razor to their stubble”
    I feel like I’m freshly shaved! :D

  • afthi:

    Visiting Shrek (far far away) :P

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