Intangible by aelend
aelend

Intangible by

A moment came a moment went
through my mind like a vent
of a day in another time.

I seem to remember a swing
shaped as a square…or a ring?
Laughter fills my heart
but sadness also starts…

Now I am gone
no longer there
trapped in a cage.
the trials come
and i am laid bear.

All that is left of that time
are fleeting memories
like clouds in the sky
that can be seen
yet are
intangible

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Tags

depression, intangible, memories, old, remember, reminiscence, sepia, swingset, thoughts, times

Comments

  • midzing
    midzingover 4 years ago

    love it,,, well done,, the black and white is so perfect

  • Joan Smart
    Joan Smartover 4 years ago

    wonderful!!!!!

  • CowGirlZen
    CowGirlZenover 4 years ago

    the words fit the capture

  • Hegner
    Hegnerover 4 years ago

    sepia is a complemet, well SEEN

  • missalyshachristine
    missalyshachristineover 4 years ago

    wow this is…

    BRILLIANT!

    i <3 the tones
    sepia rockss

  • Scott Denny
    Scott Dennyover 4 years ago

    Very nice emotive BW. Great job. Keep on clickin!!

  • Marnie Hibbert
    Marnie Hibbertover 4 years ago

    so still yet evocative….awesome capture

  • Solomon Walker
    Solomon Walkerabout 4 years ago

    great shot!

  • thanks so much. this is probably my own favorite that i have taken.

    – aelend

  • budrfli
    budrflialmost 4 years ago

    ummm yeah! where did it go!
    vry nice in black and white,
    timeless feeling!