~ Sun's Dance ~
Another of my inspired poems from a fellow Bubbler’s awesome art
This time the brilliantly talented Mr Roger Sampson
Please view his stunning portfolio and especially his piece The Dance
Thank you Roger for all your inspiration enticing me to improve with every word!
Enjoy! :o)
~ Sun's Dance ~ belongs to the following groups:
Light In The Darkness, Live, Love, Dream: and WMGIn stillness and darkness the reeds stand sentential
waiting for the magic to come
The water is lulling lapping enticing
wait for it … wait for it …
patience
No herald will call announcing the moment
no watch can be certain the time
At first it’s a murmur as breezes do whisper
not long now … not long now …
believe
Then hush what was that a flicker a beam
the magical dance has begun
In moments the water is carrying dancers …
flickering romances …
magical prancers …
Look!
The dance of the sun!
Marion Cullen
Love how you harnessed the anticipation and the eventual joy that comes with the unveiling. Your words match the image beautifully.
adgray replied
Thank you so much :o)
Have missed you of late
where have you been?
to find me new gates? :o)
adgray replied
LOL I didn’t mean to make a rhyme of that lol ☺
Chookas my friend :o) ♥
Marion Cullen
Lol…well, have to say it’s nice to know I was missed!
I have had some time away from RB with only intermitent participation, had some health issues to attend to with some surgery scheduled recently. Having a few days off work hence some time on RB today. Seems I have missed some exciting things, (have read some of your journal entries etc)...way to go for speaking up Alyssa, am behind you all the way.
adgray replied
Thank you my friend :o) ♥
& of course you were missed! I hope all is getting better now!
Skik is thinking of you too …. [well he’s in Warrnambool and he’s thinking of the bloody gates! lol]
I too have surgery looming! second week of next month!
Thankfully though the cause has diminished yet they are still doing the reduction! YAY!!! :o)
A month ago when it was out of the blue & suddenly in my face I was petrified of it !! But now I have restored my faith in the surgeons and have prepared and so I am ready to see it through! I keep telling myself it will be fine :o) lol
And how bout that debate :o) .... all I said was …...
No! Wait! ... Look what happened when I did that already lol
Good to see you round! :o) Keep Happy Lady Lumi ♥
DBALehane
Beautifully done…the internal rhythm almost sounds like waters lapping and reeds brushing
adgray replied
Really? ain’t I clever lol
Hang on I’ll check …... yeah it does! :o) W O W !!! :o)
[lol I just wowed my own work lol]
I have no idea what I’m writing till it’s written :o)
Thank you so much for feeling that :o) xox ♥
hilarydougill
Very visual writing, beautifully written
adgray replied
Thank you so much Hillary :o)
Marion Cullen
Thanks hon, and Skik.
You did good girl! Never feel you don’t have a right to express what you are passionate about!
Hard to keep us Aussie chicks down. lol
adgray replied
hard to keep us quiet too lol
thanks Lumi I think it’s over but who knows lol It has really given me insights to word interpretations and how people think :o)
Keep Happy :o) xoxox ♥
Sally Omar
Just saw Rog’s pic…your poetry is amazing…and fits so very well…Sally xxoo
adgray replied
Thank you Sally :o)
and Skik is one of your avid fans so I get to hear all your poems :o)
Thank you for reading my words :o)
Chookas :o)
Max Gatrell
A really pretty piece adgray, for me it invokes images of water nymphs and their Majestical dancing ;)
M
adgray replied
Thank you that was how I sort of viewed it too :o)
but then this poem came in and weeeelll …... :o)
Keep Happy! :o)
Max Gatrell
Happiness is a choice we make every moment of the Day ;)
Great piece of writing…I still see those Nymphs!
M
lianne
The little water ballet nymphs waiting the curtain up call – one can feel the orchestra warming up behind the scenes, the kind of nervous anticipation back stage – incredible rhythm here Alyssa and just perfect imagery to evoke this much welcomed moment. One of your best, my dear – musical, lyrical piece!
adgray replied
Thank you!
I am so glad this is good – it’s on awesome Roger’s art work so it needed to be no less than excellent! lol
I didn’t even see the rhythm being ebbing & flowing like a wave until DBA pointed it out lol
I am so glad it worked :o)
And I am really please that you liked it :o)
Thank you for reading my words :o)
Dayonda
An exquite bit of poetry, adgray. It seems as if it were written for the group, but I can see it was written and just waiting for the Group to happen.