~Granma's Concerto~

“Whatcha playing?”
‘I love Granma”
“How’s it go?”
‘Like this”

You can feel the gentle rhythm
hear the notes softly floating
you can see the love shining
as he composes his concerto

There’s a trill up in the high notes
and an echo way down low
“That’s us laughing you know”
he smiles as he continues his concerto

Now there’s a tangle of notes running
as he tells of how you’re playing
a strong stroked single note
“… when you push me on the swing!”
and then a gentle arpeggio so very softly played
repeated over and over and you feel the sway
“That’s when you rock me on your lap while we nap!”
It’s been a very full concerto

The last note he plays is a tiny little thing
but he lets the echo of it ring and ring and ring
“That’s one last kiss goodbye as I gotto go”
and thus ends his first love concerto!

adgray©2010
For Granma! =0þ


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~Granma's Concerto~ by

*My favourite bubble artist,
the awesome Lynda Robinson ,
posted this freshly finished painting of her grandson playing piano

and the words just flowed!

For you my dear friend!
Chookas!* ♥

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About adgray

adgray is a writer and a poet
- telling stories all her life,
- writing them down once she learnt how
“Scribbling! Always scribling!”
… and no there was nothing to be done about it!
Her poetry came later when the gift found her to be a ZETE segue (Zographonic Extemporanious Treatise Ekphrasis)
At times she can go into a trance-like state as poetry flows through her to the page and screen
Thank you for coming to read my words! ~ adgray~

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  • ShadowDancer
    ShadowDancerover 2 years ago

    ohhhhh this gave me goosebumps! how utterly precious, and such a great job describing the different sounds. beautiful!

  • Thank you SD
    Yep It gave me goosebumps too! Ü
    like I always do when playing with children I looked at this little boy and thought “What story are you telling us with your play?”
    Then I tried to think like a child who didn’t know the “official” wording and how he would explain it all
    I’m so glad you liked this!
    Chookas! ♥Ü♥

    – adgray

  • VoluntaryRanger
    VoluntaryRangerover 2 years ago

    that is lovely……well done

  • Thank you Jamie
    Chookas! ♥Ü♥

    – adgray

  • MichaelTravis
    MichaelTravisover 2 years ago
    So very sweet my friend.How are you my dear.Long time no see.Ya’ knowyou never realize how much you like a person till they have been away a while.Miss ya’……………………………………Michael MMMMMMMMMMWA! :)
  • Mike You do NOT want to know lol ….. no just a few more weeks and I can explain everything! and I only wish it was something exciting like launching my book – but no! ANYHOO Thank you for coming to see this and for keeping an eye out for me (you can put it back in now! lol)
    Chookas! ♥Ü♥

    – adgray

  • Sally Omar
    Sally Omarover 2 years ago

    Beautiful!!!!! xoxoxoxo

  • monocotylidono
    monocotylidonoover 2 years ago

    Very sweet! Chookas!

  • Tania Palermo
    Tania Palermoover 2 years ago

    Very nice…

  • Holly Kempe
    Holly Kempeover 2 years ago

    oh that is so so lovely!!!

  • Pagly4u
    Pagly4uover 2 years ago

    As a Pianist and an organise I love the look of Utter Concentration on his sweet face…..he is SOO into it………Beautiful……Hugs Biguns…….XXX

  • Thank you Pagly,
    This is Lynda Robinson – my favourite visual artist on the Bubble and close to my fave on the planet – certainly of any alive!
    I saw this and thought (like I always do when playing with children) “What story are you telling us with your play?”
    I am so glad you saw this for in a way it is an ode to all budding pianists
    and if parents are astute then who knows what skills their children could develop with encouragement!
    Chookas! ♥Ü♥

    – adgray

  • anaisnais
    anaisnaisabout 2 years ago

    I see you have returned with muse in full swing! A beautiful rendition of poetry – Well done indeed! Smiles, Anna-Marie.