~Black Water~
I saw a gorgeous tranquil scene by Richard Stanley
Quiet reflections…
and I was going to comment on how nice it was when, as I scrolled down to the box, I saw the word “eerie” in the comments and it set my creative mind off !! lol
Just a little ditty … with a twist! >)
Thank you Richard! =0þ
Chookas! ♥
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The quiet will sing in your ears
still black water
The memory last through the years
deep still black water
Nothing could penetrate
the calm peace of the lake
come and meet your fate
black water
• adgray©2009
rodeorose
Beautiful- nicely done. Something about black water eh? I agree…
adgray replied
Oh yes I love it!
I will swim in it and canoe over it with blissfull happiness
but couldn’t have the same courage in the sea! lol
and yet black water – river or lake will always hold that eerieness of “what lies beneath?” lol
Thanks for reading my words!
Chookas! ♥
Matt Roberts
Interesting.
adgray replied
haha =0þ
Sometimes I like to leave it to you to think of what lies beneath ….
... just like black water does! >) lol
Thanks for reading my words!
Chookas! ♥
MichaelTravis
I so enjoy my dear.I once fell off a set of water ski’s in black water.Such an eery
feeling not knowing what lies beneath.Especially when the water was 200 feet deep.
Yikes! LOL! MMMMMMMMMMMMWA! :)
raymondo
Great verse… I like it..