~ two prickles ~

adgray
Author: adgray
Word Count: 57
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~ two prickles ~

the very talented Mr Paul Rees-Jones posted a very true picture of nature vs man made Nettles on Barbs
these words was my warning in my head I thought you’d like to hear them too!
Simply “DON’T TOUCH EITHER”
Chookas! ♥

~ two prickles ~ belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Live, Love, Dream: , Mature Woman, The Patchwork and WMG

two prickles
either will hurt
neither gives
any alert

the hiss of the wire draws blood from the skin
the tip of the plant buries deep within
one leaves a poison to paralyze
the other an itch and welts red rise
Beware either for neither will play
and look for the flowers on this bright summer’s day

  • Anne van Alkemade

    Anne van Alkemade

    ooooh, like this. Do you have a link to the image???

  • adgray replied

    MAN You’re quick lol
    Link is up now :O)

  • Nancy Stafford

    Nancy Stafford

    I love it.. your writting is fantastic

  • adgray replied

    Thank you so much Nancy :O)
    Chookas! ♥

  • Anne van Alkemade

    Anne van Alkemade

    Excellent collab. Addie.

  • adgray replied

    Yep the words just hit me like I’d put my hand on that fence!
    Liked your pic too :O) – you can put the link to it in here too if you like :O)
    Chookas! ♥

  • amarica

    amarica

    Excellent collaboration Hun!

  • Sean Jansen

    Sean Jansen

    Great writing , but ouch !!

  • Jen Whyte

    Jen Whyte

    That hurt!! haha! great stuff

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