~ gentle in the green ~

adgray
Author: adgray
Word Count: 71
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~ gentle in the green ~

A fellow Red Bubbler has again encouraged me to wax lyrical :O)
I hope my sweet verse equals the beauty of Rob Hardy’s capture of Scaling Foss

Enjoy! :O)

~ gentle in the green ~ belongs to the following groups:

Green!, Live, Love, Dream: , Mature Woman, The Patchwork , The Urban Environment and WMG

Soft the fall like a bride’s virgin veil
gentile in the green
The eons and eons of time flowed by
Such gradual erosion that’s been

Soft the touch my lady fair
gentile in the green
The eons and eons of love I feel
No more beauty I’ve seen

Sleep my love forever more
gentle in the green
The eons and eons of travellers will pass
and know the love that’s been

  • RMonroe

    RMonroe

    Beautiful words and a beautiful image:)

  • adgray replied

    Thank you Robin :O)
    Rob does take a good shot doesn’t he :O)
    [makes a good cuppa too so I’m told <) lol :O) ]
    Thank you for dropping in to read my words ~ Chookas! ♥

  • lianne

    lianne

    The rhythm of a Highland melody Alyssa – I can hear it in my head, with pipes! Just lovely!

  • adgray replied

    Oh yes so can I :O)
    Ssssh don’t tell them Yorkshire lads that took the photo they’ll come after us with broadsword and I still haven’t finished sharpening the claymore!
    Thank you for reading ~ your comments are special to me X ♥ X

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Alyssa, How very awesome…both writing and picture are so very amazing!!!!! Sally xxoo

  • adgray replied

    Thank you sally and I agree Sir Rob does a fine job with his lens …. errr …. is a fine camera man :O) {Blushing now <| !!} :O)
    Thank you for coming to read my words!!
    Keep Happy! :O)

  • dawndavies

    dawndavies

    stunning work from the both of you

  • adgray replied

    From both of us thank you :O) XX ♥ XX

  • Jan Stead JEMproductions

    Jan Stead JEMp...

    YAY!!!! She’s back…I mean you’re back!!!
    So nice to see some more of your awesome and wonderful bubbler inspired work!!!

    Beautiful, lyrical, gently and fits so beautifully with the image…indeed enhances it!

    Thank you Alyssa for your gift to us!

    Jan…..........xxO

    : )

  • adgray replied

    Who Said ???
    I have kids all over me and I have NO time to be anything! lol – ok I’ve had an hour here and an hour there but not enough to keep up my bubbling – forgive me? :O)
    Thank you again my patient friend for watching out for me :O)
    Chookas! XX ♥ XX

  • Robert Hardy

    Robert Hardy

    Beautiful ad. Thanks!

  • adgray replied

    You’re welcome Sir Rob & thank you for your pic … especially while under such scrutinizing surveillance !! :O) Did you tell him to go find his own foss?? :O)
    Thank you for the inspiration and the fun man :O) Chookas! XX ♥ XX

  • papadad

    papadad

    Beautiful work so lyrical, so right, just wonderful

  • adgray replied

    Thank you Papadad :O)
    I wasn’t sure where this rhythm was taking me but I do so like the pattern that turned out :O)
    Keep Happy! :O)

  • adgray

    adgray

    I tell you I drop in leave a poem and have to come back and type for an hour! :O)
    I love you all and all your comments are special to me – makes me happy that people read and like my words :O) Chookas all! You are all sparkling diamonds and hearts! XX ♥ XX

  • liesbeth

    liesbeth

    Both the poem and the picture are just great.

  • adgray replied

    Thank you my friend :O)
    Keep Happy! X ♥ X

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