~ Rejuvenate Your Soul ~

adgray
Author: adgray
Word Count: 155
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~ Rejuvenate Your Soul ~

Again RB Art inspired poetry.
Peter’s art insisted I wrote these words
It is how I feel … how I think … when I look at this pure beauty
Please view his brilliant art and help to rejuvenate your soul! ♥

Enjoy! :O)

~ Rejuvenate Your Soul ~ belongs to the following groups:

Green!, Live, Love, Dream: , The Patchwork and WMG

Here is a magical musical hush, of insect bird and frog
the ring of a call floats on the air … lulling the visitor …
peaceful … gentle … graceful … slow
Periodically interrupted by the shriek of Kopake
then to return … to the lull … of bliss

There is a fresh clear mountain breeze, of pure clean air
Breathe in deep and feel the growth … heady with scent …
of fern … of mint … of mist … of earth
Inducing a cough to clear out impurity
and fill again … with pristine … life

Be at one with the forest, at one with the stream, at one with the world we walk on
See all around abundant with wisdom … easy with care …
Move, speak, think, … at the speed … of life
forget all the deadlines, the have tos and musts
and learn … to be real … again

  • Tom Broderick IPA

    Tom Broderick IPA

    so true stress free. great work. tom

  • adgray replied

    Wow! Thank you Tom
    Can I come ballooning with you next time you go? :O)
    Keep Happy! x♥x

  • Tom Broderick IPA

    Tom Broderick IPA

    sure you can be cool. tom

  • Miri

    Miri

    so peaceful – art & words, lovely

  • adgray replied

    I’m glad you like
    I was a bit worried it wouldn’t work – the last stanza doesn’t seem to have the same rhythm as the other two ~ that first line has spread over two and the mood is more telling where as the other stanzas are more informing.
    but I hope it works well enough :O)

  • Miri

    Miri

    i think it works – to me it feels like you describe the scene in the first 2 & then appreciate it in the last!

  • adgray replied

    Cool !! That works for me! :O)
    Thank you :O) Chookas! X♥X

  • reflector

    reflector

    Excellent ! It makes the mind conjure up images of the scene and the thinking is magical.

  • Amanda Gazidis

    Amanda Gazidis

    Very enticing, fresh and beautiful words…

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